Just a song I wrote for that extraordinary woman in my life. Hope you all like it.
1,801 2008-01-09 03:02:36
Topic: Extraordinary Love (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
1,802 2008-01-09 02:07:34
Re: Number 47 – A Regular Fortune (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks Lena and Roger . I thought it was a good song idea too and it was really laid out there for me in the fortune. I just needed to turn it into a song.
1,803 2008-01-08 04:57:26
Topic: Number 47 – A Regular Fortune (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
In October, some of you may remember that my family and I went to Japan. One of the places we visited was the Asakusa Shrine(http://www.japan-guide.com/e/e3004.html). One of the tourist type things people do there is buy these little fortunes which I bought and ended up getting what was called a regular fortune. If you get a bad one you can tie it to a tree and the fortune goes away but if you get a good one then you keep it. Regular ones I guess you can give it back too but I kept mine because my life has been regular and fortunate with no big windfalls or tragedies just a regular life that I’m happy to say suits me just fine. Sorry to make it so long but it was a story so I had to finish it. Hope you all like it.
Number 47 – A Regular Fortune By Jeff Gilpin
1,804 2008-01-06 02:06:48
Re: Face in the Crowd (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Reb -I was playing around with this but all I could get so far was this
[Em]I found a [Am]man with his head in his [Em]hands
Who wore a dead [Am]heart on his [C]sleeve [D]
What do you think?
1,805 2008-01-06 01:54:01
Re: Actions Don't Lie (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks for all the comments.
Hey Reb - For the FMaj7 try this: xx3210. I suck at the barred F chord (well I suck at most barred chords for that matter) so I use this cheater method. It has a similiar sound and is too difficult for me to play (easy transition from a C) so feel free to use it if you like. It works for most songs with an F and has a quite pleasent sound I think.
Hey Paul - I need to get up to speed on the whole video side of computers. I will give it a go sometime but recording takes an awful long time as it is. I'll switch to video some day I guess but not any time soon.
1,806 2008-01-05 04:20:06
Topic: Actions Don't Lie (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I sometimes have a problem with thinking one thing and when I go to say what I’m thinking I mess it up. This song is about that and how doing things will get your point across as good or better than saying them in the long run.
Actions Don’t Lie By Jeff Gilpin
1,807 2008-01-04 03:13:07
Re: writers that inspire you- just out of curiosty (34 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Writers who inspire me are ones who can write a song that I can see in my head when I play. One favorite of mine if Jackson Browne; his songs For a Dancer, Looking into You and Fountain of Sorrow, all three I can see in my head when I listen. I still get misty eyed listening to the words "...'Cause I know that you'd rather we were dancing"
1,808 2008-01-04 02:50:41
Re: Nekkid- a ridiculous little song about well, being naked (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Reb - Great topic and sounds great too. I had trouble playing this without smiling.
1,809 2008-01-04 02:44:03
Re: Those Eyes (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks James and Toney - On the first and third line I go from a C to a C7 but I thought it might be a little too busy to include for the forum. It does give the song a nicer sound I think if you want to give it a try.
Toney - the C7/Fmaj7 along with Dm7/Am7 chord mix sounded good to me and the words seemed to fit
1,810 2008-01-03 05:26:44
Topic: Those Eyes (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is just a little song about the woman whose eyes to this day still leave me speechless. I hope you all like it.
Those Eyes By Jeff Gilpin
1,811 2008-01-02 05:22:44
Topic: Tomorrow (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is just a song about change and how it seems needed changes get lost or overlooked sometimes due to petty politics. I just wish there were more folks in power throughout the world who would try to make the world a better place. Maybe one day they can succeed. Anyway I hope you all like the song.
Tomorrow By Jeff Gilpin
1,812 2007-12-31 23:43:34
Re: Down to Georgia (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Yeah, this one is kind of twangy the way I play and sing it. I'm sorry you've never had the chance to get over here Roger. I bet you'd like it in the states. I will try and record it sometime but my list is getting rather long.
1,813 2007-12-31 23:38:07
Re: 29 and Holding (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
She really liked it and seemed very pleased. She really is holding up well too.
1,814 2007-12-31 06:46:18
Re: Down to Georgia (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey James - I've really been thinking about using harmony in most of my songs, at hleast the new ones. It really worked out well in Grey Skies and Ayase Lullaby so I'm kind of assuming it's going to be in them all. Thanks
1,815 2007-12-31 00:33:54
Topic: Down to Georgia (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Growing up in the western part of North Carolina, my family would often take trips to Georgia for one reason or another and I developed a fondness for that great state. So here is that fondness expressed in this song and I hope you all like it and get a chance to visit as well.
Down to Georgia By Jeff Gilpin
© Jeff Gilpin 2009
1,816 2007-12-27 19:31:30
Re: 29 and Holding (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thanks very much Toney - I like it too. I'm holding off on playing it for the wife until the "big" day which is Saturday. I'm just hoping she likes it too.
1,817 2007-12-27 16:31:32
Topic: 29 and Holding (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
My Wife’s birthday is in a few days so I wrote her this to help her celebrate. I hope you all like it.
29 and holding By Jeff Gilpin
1,818 2007-12-24 03:01:56
Topic: Please Santa Claus (1 replies, posted in Songwriting)
First of all, this is purely fictitious. My baby treats me good, but that would never make a good bluesy Christmas song so I what if’ed she didn’t treat me so good and came up with this. Hope you all like it.
Please Santa Claus By Jeff Gilpin
1,819 2007-12-23 21:39:43
Re: Christmas in the Desert (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Well, Billy Joel's song is a bit darker than mine I must say. I've kind of focused on the solders' reasons for being over there and their side of this war without dwelling on the political reasons why the solders are there. I think I might have treaded a darker path if I had mixed the whole political side into the song. I really worry about our kids who are over there and who take the monetary reenlistment incentives that are being offered and end up serving multiple tours in a place that is not very safe. It's kind of like a high stake gamble.
1,820 2007-12-23 17:52:21
Re: Christmas in the Desert (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Lena - Actually I have heard the story behind this song and there was a movie made about it called "Joyeux Noël" back in 2005 that I saw and did a pretty good job capturing the moment (thanks to Netflix for letting me find it). Being a bit of a crazed football fan I often search out movies with football and I guess both the Carol and later a football match happend during this battle in the war. I recommend this if you ever get the chance to see it. It is a good story for people who like to think about the human side of war, like me. I would love to hear you sing this if you would like to post it on your site I would be forever in your debt (no pressure though as I think I owe you a song or twenty myself). Thanks and have a Merry Christmas.
1,821 2007-12-23 06:12:53
Re: Christmas in the Desert (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Dino - Thanks. Yep, my son went back over for his second tour back in November. He is a lot busier this time around so I'm hoping it will make the time go a little faster for him. It's still going to creep along for me I'm sure. I hope you and your's have a great Christmas.
1,822 2007-12-23 05:10:38
Topic: Christmas in the Desert (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This is just a song for all the troops serving far away this Christmas.
Christmas in the Desert By Jeff Gilpin
1,823 2007-12-22 16:58:31
Re: a late night Friday afternoon (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey Ken - I played it Blues in E (E, E7, A, B7...that sort of thing) and it seemed to work out. I have to admit I can't get my own voice around scotish slang (if you can imagine a cross between scot slang and american country...well thats what came out...not a good combination. It sure is a nice down on your luck and don't care story song.
1,824 2007-12-22 06:18:10
Topic: Reasons Why (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Just a little introspective thinking that kind of ties in with what I've been doing: planning my goals for the next year, self assessment performance reviews for the past year, and song writing that never seems to stop no matter what time of year. I hope you all like it.
Reasons Why By Jeff Gilpin
1,825 2007-12-21 22:13:50
Re: Emotional Music (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey you Guys - Thanks - I feel the same. Sometimes I want to play sad music because I'm sad other times I want to play it because I'm happy and just like the tune....Bell Bottom Blues is a great example of both...Working Class Hero is another song I like to play no matter what mood I'm in. Now Emotional Music is not a sad song but I kind of play it like a bluegrass tune and a little upbeat. Yep, Roger, it's a good finger picking song too and it makes me wish I could play the banjo.