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To all of those in my life who care about me,
my eyes are filled with so much hurt, I can't see.
Just please have patience, for I've fallen again,
no matter how hard I try, I feel I just can't win.
I brush myself off, put my feet back on the ground,
because I know there's a reason, why I'm still around.
I try as hard as I can, to do my very best,
but it seems like all my efforts, never please the rest.
I feel like all the people, that I care about the most,
don't acknowledge me, it makes me feel like I'm a ghost.
I have to follow my heart, its quest is unbound,
I've fallen again, I'm down hear on the ground.
A person can only get back up so many times,
before they need some help, that's why I write these lines.
If someone sees on the ground a struggling man,
would you please stop real quick, to offer me your hand.
I've fallen again and I'm on the ground...
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u-n-b
This is not a sermon, just what went through my mind as I finished Reading your poem.
"When we are down and feel no one sees us, we can always depend on Jesus."
Keep the poems coming and your chin up. AL(Deadstring)
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hi upside, welcome to chordie.
just to say "your efforts have pleased me" good first effort, look forward to seeing more from you
phill
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thanx 
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VERY GOOD WORDS FROM THE HEART!! thats how i write and i can tell u do the same!! keep on writing my friend!!!
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mirron wrote:
VERY GOOD WORDS FROM THE HEART!! thats how i write and i can tell u do the same!! keep on writing my friend!!!
Thanks mirron
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