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#1 2011-07-09 18:00:10

tommydone
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Registered: 2010-02-18
Posts: 52

untitled ;for Denise

If I lost you
the sun would never come up over my horizon
if i lost you
the rains would have no end
if I lost you
the days would just flow into one another
if I lost you
the skies would all go dim

your love is like air
it gives my body life
but it's more than an emotion
without it I will die

my sweet Denise
don't you know that it's you I need
so lucky to have you
your love is like a planted seed
and it's taken it's root in me

if I lost you
there would be no colors just black and white
if I lost you
the seasons would never change
if I lost you
I would grow old alone in my mirror
if I lost you
nothing would be the same

your love is like air
it gives my body life
it's more that an emotion
without it I would die

my sweet Denise
don't you know that iot's you I need
so lucky to have you
your love is like a planted seed
that has taken it's roots in me

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#2 2011-07-23 17:24:40

T-Rex
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Registered: 2009-09-16
Posts: 158

Re: untitled ;for Denise

Hi tommydone, this is lovely, I could hear it as a song.  I understand completely. -t-rex

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#3 2011-07-24 03:36:50

tommydone
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Registered: 2010-02-18
Posts: 52

Re: untitled ;for Denise

Thank you , I would love to do it as a song and surprise her for her birthday on Halloween , any suggestions would be great.

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