Topic: songwriteing songs i have written

Song 1 Title:What i'd give
I feel like you never even loved me i wanted to say goodbye.your just a blury picter now just a blury picture in my mind

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

Verse.i feel like u just ran away right away from me i wanted to see ur face i was to young to realy understand but its still not to late

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

Bridge.i wish youd understand the way i feel right now but i know now u never will i wish it wasnt r

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

I have more reply if u want some o ya copywrited so dnt try to steal them the feds will get u

Re: songwriteing songs i have written

Your creation is quite safe I assure you.

"Growing old is not for sissies"

Re: songwriteing songs i have written

Hi aarbear98
Welcome to Chordie.
Please could you add some music to your song chords etc or your song will be classed as a poem and will be moved to the poem forum as per Chordie guidelines.
Thanks
arkady (mod)

myspace.com/onlyarkady/music/songs

4 (edited by aarbear98 2013-01-25 21:09:27)

Re: songwriteing songs i have written

@Russell_Harding tnx im only 14 tho i got more to it just takes awhile to type them and @arkady so sorry i forgot sad ill do it next time oand ill be putting music to this son