• mojo01
  • mojo01
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Topic: things we say

(C) sometimes we (G)say things (D)we do not (G)mean
(C)sometimes they(G) hurt and (D)sometimes they (G)sting
(C)its love or(G) hate or (D)something(G) between
(C)why must we (G)take it and (D)make it (G)obscene

chorus
(D)you said something's that you (C)cannot take (G)back
(D)I said something's that (C)turned your heart(G) black
(D)why must we go at each (C)other this(G) way
(D)we'll be alone at the (C)end of the (G)day

sometimes we love and soar like the birds
sometimes we hate and cut with our words
sometimes our lives can be so serene
why must we take fire and add gasoline

chorus

sometimes I miss you cant wait to get home
but I get my fill and I want to roam
but something about you keeps brining me back
I've changed my mind before I've even packed

(D)you said something's that you(C) cannot take(G) back
(D)I said something's that turned(C) your heart(G) black
(D)we keep on dancing this(C) love hate(G) ballet
(D but we're still together at the(C) end of the (G)day


https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/love-hate

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Re: things we say

Great lyrics and a nice easy tune to play.
Thanks for posting.

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Re: things we say

Mojo

Another excellent lyric and arrangement.  It sounded quite " Beatle"ish to me, which is always a sign of excellent music.
Sentiment of the is well established, and the delivered performance was top notch !

Keep'em coming my friend, a pleasure to listen to.

You really need to connect to a music producer - you have a lot of "Texas sized talent " !

Jim

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Re: things we say

Good job, Mojo ... love the rhyme and the contrast between "serene" and "gasoline".

  • mojo01
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Re: things we say

thanks for the comments guys ,
Funster,  I thought that was the second best line, i thought the love hate ballet was the best one but that's just me

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Re: things we say

Very nice job on this one Mojo!

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