I remember seeing this post a few weeks ago and meaning to come back in here to listen and comment. I'm so glad it's still here, and you didn't remove the recording. That's such a beautiful song, and tends to make me cry... thinking about that whole, what if Heaven is there and do little kids grow up or just stay little and would they be living a whole different life like some other dimension and even remember us? Well, anyway, that's what I hear when I listen to this song. It is a DIFFICULT song to play. There's no way I could do it justice! I think you've done it quite well.
If you have been practicing it since this was posted, I'd love to hear a new recording all polished up!
Art and beauty are in the eyes of the beholder.
What constitutes excellent music is in the ears of the listener.