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Topic: Each Day

each day
i rise with the

thought of light
the roaring brightness,
enlightened contrast

of eams and rays
in a medley of grace

i stand before
the earth and chase
darkness towards
the flames
deep beneath the
universal traits
you are my fame
sunshine

daylight desires
open a cycle

of nocturnals
painting away the night
giving birth
to a new life
a new day...


a simple chapter
starting with a thought
that spoke of

daylight

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Re: Each Day

Luther

Very well written !

Great message

Jim

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Re: Each Day

Hi Luther.

Welcome to Chordie. There are a few niceties that we all must follow when posting a new poem for instance. Main one is that we DO NOT in any circumstance add our poem (regardless of how good it is) onto another member's thread, as you have done. But not to worry, we all make mistakes, you're not the first and you wont be the last, I've made them even the head honcho below god, Mr Guppy, has made a few. And so please, if you add more, and I hope you do and become one of the regular community, please start your own thread in that way you will get more attention to your work. I hope you have read and understood this and in the future start your own thread unless you have a comment to make on another topic.

You may have noticed that I moved your original post to it's own thread.

Phill

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