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#1 2010-12-17 02:44:23

jasonhague321
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From: Barnsley,England
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Fake War Love Story (For Those In Conflict)

Fake War Lover Story (For Those In Conflict)

i cant carry your wit no not today
and you cant carry my woes
not through the thick white snow
and im sorry but the susat glows
a blood red deary dear

we cant get close
there is no inbetween, between enemy lines

i cant accept the hand of the past
rearranging the future
with squabbles and traditions of old
and did you hear the whispers

four young men dead in the snow
there is no end, what is it we really fend for

its not honour i know

for if being a coward is to accept
that we are wrong
then i will be a coward until
i meet our maker
for the sake of younger blood

my mind walks past the make shift graves
my feet leaves tracks
as my eyes leave tears in the snow
making a little stream as it dissolves

i feel my mother watching from the distance
shaking her head dissaprovingly
i cant feel my father but i can see his
face in my mind

the seasons will come and go but
the blood leaves a stain
in the heart and in time forever

forever


We treat mishaps like sinking ships...

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#2 2010-12-31 00:02:06

daddycool
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From: derbyshire
Registered: 2007-05-17
Posts: 2757
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Re: Fake War Love Story (For Those In Conflict)

hi jason nice to see you posting,a great story line well written....stay cool


love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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#3 2011-01-01 12:24:30

jasonhague321
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From: Barnsley,England
Registered: 2007-06-04
Posts: 822

Re: Fake War Love Story (For Those In Conflict)

Thanks it's a great release


We treat mishaps like sinking ships...

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