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#1 2011-01-02 22:55:11

Flybye
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Registered: 2007-05-24
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Me and My Guitar

Me & My Guitar

I was walkin down the street one day
and just did happen to see,
this pretty long necked beauty
lookin back at me.

I knew I had to have her
so in the store I went,
she would be my girl
if it cost me my last cent.

This was just the beginning
of what was meant to be,
a beautiful love affair,
my guitar and me.

I used to fret and worry
things were always going wrong,
but with all those frets to play on
life's been nothing but a song.

I pick on her a lot
yes, I know it's true
but you should hear the sounds she makes
I love her, yes I do.

We've made sweet tunes together
many happy, sometimes blue,
my pear shaped, long necked doll
what a pair we are, we two.

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#2 2011-01-03 00:08:56

daddycool
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Registered: 2007-05-17
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Re: Me and My Guitar

hi flybye welcome to chordie,it looks like you've been sat in the side lines for three yearsseeing as this is your first post since you joined,well your first effort is a lovely piece,we all think of our guitars in the same way so we can follow you down these lines,well done....stay cool


love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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#3 2011-01-03 04:02:37

dino48
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From: los banos,california
Registered: 2007-04-06
Posts: 4707

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hello flybye you said a mouthfull,I have an old yamaha I love , I have better guitars but I love it and will never get rid of it. It only cost me fifty dollars but it has been everwhere with me.


my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman.

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#4 2011-01-03 07:29:04

Flybye
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Re: Me and My Guitar

Thanks for your comments. I'll have to go strum on my little sweetheart and see if she can inspire me to write something else. After all, it only took me 3 years to post this.

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#5 2011-01-03 09:55:23

arkady
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Re: Me and My Guitar

Hi Flybye
I enjoyed this poem, nicely written. Make a good song if hasn't already.
Thanks for sharing.
ark

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#6 2011-01-03 17:02:40

Flybye
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Thanks Arkady,
I'll have to tickle her a little bit and see what she comes up with.

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#7 2011-01-03 17:08:28

bensonp
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From: Tooele Ut
Registered: 2006-03-04
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Good Flybye.  This represents feelings for a lot of us I am sure.  Well done.


You can see all my video covers on http://www.youtube.com/bensonp1000
I have finally found happiness in my life.  Guitars, singing, beer and camping.  And they all intertwine wonderfully.

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#8 2011-01-03 17:58:43

KAP54
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From: London Ontario Canada
Registered: 2008-06-04
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Well Done Flybye.

I like the way you tied it together to make it sound like your talking about your girl smile

Kudos , looking forwards to hearing this.

Kenny


Just Keepin on Keepin on
Martin DC15E
Cort MR710F

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#9 2011-04-25 08:38:35

steelstrings
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From: Western Australia (born in NZ)
Registered: 2011-04-18
Posts: 322

Re: Me and My Guitar

Love it!


"Where you begin doesn't matter. Your willingness to start is what counts."
Without music life would be a mistake.
Country music is three chords and the truth.
cool cool cool cool cool cool

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#10 2011-08-25 18:15:40

fretnot
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Registered: 2010-12-26
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Re: Me and My Guitar

Very clever!


"I have a sweet tooth for song and music."-Pope John Paul II

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#11 2011-08-28 05:15:17

Flybye
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Registered: 2007-05-24
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Thanks Fretnot

Flybye

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