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Flows well and touches on the feelings. Looks good to me. Now if I just knew how it sounds.
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Looks good,like too hear it.
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I love lyrics, but it always seems to round it out when you can actually hear it as you meant it when you wrote it. Looks good at this stage, play it for us sometime.
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hi tigljk lokks and feels good,can't make out what the squiggly bits are in the lyric lines but good story line anyway....stay cool
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Hey Dude I like ya Lyrics Bigtime, Iv'e Been listening to Country stuff out hear in S.D. On 99.5 they play the other side of the record. So ya hear all this cool stuff that should been on the #1 playlist, Anyway thanks. Ya see I just lost my Nephew and my 28 yr. old son all in the sam Month. Im actually writing a song about the hurt ya Feel in your chest that just won't stop. About the love you have you can't turn off likr a switch. The true sick to your stomach and drikn' ain't gonna make it go away kind'a shit. Anyway feel ya pain Dude. ......Dicky
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Thanks for the kudo I am truly sorry for your losses - no one can imagine the devastation of emotionsin situations like yours unless they experience it - I would like to know when you get your song done because i love songs that come from the heart - and I know yours will be. We have a lot of people here in NY going through tough times too after Hurricane Sandy . Best wishes and prayers to you and your family . I will send a copy of the mp3 of the song to your email - I hope thats ok. Take care JK
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I can't send mp3 cuz it wont let me attach it sorry
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How true it is about country music, lots of feeling in this piece.
I would like to hear it also, maybe post it on Youtube?
Well Done ![]()
Ken
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dicky fisher wrote:
Hey Dude I like ya Lyrics Bigtime, Iv'e Been listening to Country stuff out hear in S.D. On 99.5 they play the other side of the record. So ya hear all this cool stuff that should been on the #1 playlist, Anyway thanks. Ya see I just lost my Nephew and my 28 yr. old son all in the sam Month. Im actually writing a song about the hurt ya Feel in your chest that just won't stop. About the love you have you can't turn off likr a switch. The true sick to your stomach and drikn' ain't gonna make it go away kind'a shit. Anyway feel ya pain Dude. ......Dicky
(Ain't no sick like heartsick) good hook
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