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#1 2012-07-07 18:11:51

Bass Viking
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She's My Girl -an original I just redid by Jim Jenkins aka Bass Viking

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Just redid this today and I thought it sounded a little better than when I first wrote it, so decided to share to see what everybody thinks about it!  Let me know, share your opinions; it won't hurt my feelings even if you have some constructive criticism as I am forever learning.  Thanks  Big Jim


Find a Path or Make One    This is a motto I have been following my entire life and one I am currently using with my music.
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#2 2012-07-07 18:54:50

bensonp
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Re: She's My Girl -an original I just redid by Jim Jenkins aka Bass Viking

You can't go wrong with a good love song.  I like the lyrics and you sang and played it with emotion.


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#3 2012-07-07 21:04:00

dino48
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Re: She's My Girl -an original I just redid by Jim Jenkins aka Bass Viking

Ditto on what pete says,but I think it was for a grandaughter?


my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman.

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#4 2012-07-07 21:27:58

jets60
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Re: She's My Girl -an original I just redid by Jim Jenkins aka Bass Viking

Hey Jim - I'm a sucker for grandpa songs and this is a good one. Well done.


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#5 2012-07-07 21:31:51

bensonp
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Re: She's My Girl -an original I just redid by Jim Jenkins aka Bass Viking

I guess I wasn't listening close enough to the words.  I was caught up in that deep voice.


You can see all my video covers on http://www.youtube.com/bensonp1000
I have finally found happiness in my life.  Guitars, singing, beer and camping.  And they all intertwine wonderfully.

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#6 2012-07-10 14:48:48

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Re: She's My Girl -an original I just redid by Jim Jenkins aka Bass Viking

Thanks guys!  Hey Jets, you are soooo right about being a sucker for grandpa songs.  And it was a love song about my love for my granddaughter with the catch that you don't realize that right up until the end.  Allowed me to put the emotion into it being it was about my granddaughter.  Thanks for the feedback.


Find a Path or Make One    This is a motto I have been following my entire life and one I am currently using with my music.
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#7 2012-09-25 18:00:41

daddycool
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Re: She's My Girl -an original I just redid by Jim Jenkins aka Bass Viking

hi base viking sorry i can't listen at moment ,speakers kaput,take a .....stay cool

Last edited by daddycool (2012-09-25 18:01:23)


love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

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#8 2012-09-25 22:47:44

dino48
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Re: She's My Girl -an original I just redid by Jim Jenkins aka Bass Viking

enjoyed your song bass.


my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman.

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