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#1 2012-09-26 15:42:03

judymills
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From: South Africa
Registered: 2012-08-24
Posts: 13
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In the end

In the end

Iím in an abyss of despair
I call out, nobody is there.
Disembowelled

Alone in the dark I stand
No one is there to take my hand
Segregated

A bottomless cavity is inside
I need to run and hide
Wretched

My soul I tried to defend
To protect, to what end?
Repudiated

Tears fall, I begin to cry
I feel lost withered and dry
Mutated

I can stand no more
I now close the door
Oblivion


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#2 2012-09-26 17:41:25

bensonp
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From: Tooele Ut
Registered: 2006-03-04
Posts: 3858

Re: In the end

Very good, but I hope you aren't necessarily writing this from experience.


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