Topic: New Song - what do you think ?

[song]
{t: (Country Music can fix)  A Hurtin’ Heart}

           
[G]    There’s times when you’re   lonely , and sometimes when you’re scared                        
there are  those times that  you  feel  just  like [D] nobody cares
There are  those [G]  times when you know that you  have to say goodbye
there’s all those [D] times you feel  like giving up, [C] you don’t even  want to [G]  try

{soc}(Chorus)
[D] Those are the lonely moments it’s [G] when you are  feeling down
It’s [C] when you feel like crying and there [G]  ain’t  no  friend   around
[G] You need a little tender care and you [C] don’t know where to start
Well  that’s [D] why we’ve got country music , [C] it can fix a hurtin’[G] heart{eoc}

[G] There’s those times that you don’t think you’ll make it through the night
Then there’s those times when you need to turn the [D] darkness into light
And for all those [G] times  that someone you loved,  crushed your foolish pride
And for  those[D]  times your heart was breaking and [C] you felt just like you [G] died

(Chorus)

[G] When  you’ve   hurt someone you loved , and you feel just like a jerk
the times when you hate your job ,  and can’t take a[D]nother day of work      
And for those [G]hard  times when you lost your   faith in the man above
those[D] times when your world came crashing down   [C] and could use a little [G]love

(Chorus)

Well  [D] that’s why we play this country music , [C] it can fix a hurtin’[G] heart   (2x)
[/song]

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: New Song - what do you think ?

Flows well and touches on the feelings.  Looks good to me.  Now if I just knew how it sounds.

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Re: New Song - what do you think ?

Looks good,like too hear it.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

Re: New Song - what do you think ?

I love lyrics, but it always seems to round it out when you can actually hear it as you meant it when you wrote it.  Looks good at this stage, play it for us sometime.

Find a Path or Make One    This is a motto I have been following my entire life and one I am currently using with my music.
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Re: New Song - what do you think ?

hi tigljk lokks and feels good,can't make out what the squiggly bits are in the lyric lines but good story line anyway....stay cool

love is life ,life is for love,keep a true heart and live life to the full....stay cool

Re: New Song - what do you think ?

Hey Dude I like ya Lyrics Bigtime, Iv'e Been listening to Country stuff out hear in S.D. On 99.5 they play the other side of the record. So ya hear all this cool stuff that should been on the #1 playlist, Anyway thanks. Ya see I just lost my Nephew and my 28 yr. old son all in the sam Month. Im actually writing a song about the hurt ya Feel in your chest that just won't stop. About the love you have you can't turn off likr a switch. The true sick to your stomach and drikn' ain't gonna make it go away kind'a shit. Anyway feel ya pain Dude. ......Dicky

Re: New Song - what do you think ?

Thanks for the kudo    I am truly sorry for your losses - no one can imagine the devastation of emotionsin situations like yours  unless they experience it  - I would like to know when you get your song done because i love songs that come from the heart - and I know yours will be.   We have a lot of people here in NY going through tough times too after Hurricane Sandy  .   Best wishes and prayers to you and your family .  I will send a copy of the mp3 of the song to your email - I hope thats ok.  Take care  JK

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: New Song - what do you think ?

I can't send mp3 cuz it wont let me attach it   sorry

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: New Song - what do you think ?

Hey TIGLJK,

I fixed the format a little so it will be a little easier to read.

Nice song.

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Redskins fan ...long story...HTTR

Re: New Song - what do you think ?

How true it is about country music, lots of feeling in this piece.
I would like to hear it also, maybe post it on Youtube?


Well Done smile

Ken

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Re: New Song - what do you think ?

dicky fisher wrote:

Hey Dude I like ya Lyrics Bigtime, Iv'e Been listening to Country stuff out hear in S.D. On 99.5 they play the other side of the record. So ya hear all this cool stuff that should been on the #1 playlist, Anyway thanks. Ya see I just lost my Nephew and my 28 yr. old son all in the sam Month. Im actually writing a song about the hurt ya Feel in your chest that just won't stop. About the love you have you can't turn off likr a switch. The true sick to your stomach and drikn' ain't gonna make it go away kind'a shit. Anyway feel ya pain Dude. ......Dicky

(Ain't no sick like heartsick) good hook