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#1 2011-07-11 00:06:38

tommydone
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Registered: 2010-02-18
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for a friend

As I sit here all alone
I think about the past
about our future and the plans we made , growin up
shouldve known they couldnt ever last
its been too many years
since youre gone
and I still find it hard to believe
my best friend only 21
had your whole life to live so why'd you have to leave

I can picture you smile
and still hear you laugh
etched and recorded in the back of my head
I believe I will see you again
What do you do when all your dreams have been shred?

you were the brother that I never had
we were just like family
with this song I am saying good bye
I'll have to live off of my memories
Until I can see you again

As I sit here all alone
I think about the past
about our future and the plans we made growing up
now I know they will always last

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#2 2011-07-13 08:45:03

jamier
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Registered: 2010-05-20
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Re: for a friend

Very sad theme.
I too had a good friend who passed away when he was just 17.


I like the two lines about believing you will see him again, hopefully one day you will be reunited.

Thanks for a good ( although ) heart wrenching poem.

Jamie R

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#3 2013-01-10 23:27:15

mirron
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Re: for a friend

YOUR LYRICS WAS GREAT AND TOUCHED MY HEART!! YOU HAVE A TALENT SO KEEP WRITING MY FRIEND!!!!!

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#4 2013-04-15 12:59:30

kapil2255
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Re: for a friend

I like your poem very much it is beautiful.


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#5 2013-04-15 16:07:22

bensonp
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Re: for a friend

Very good lyrics. I think we can all see ourselves here at one time or other.


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#6 2013-04-15 20:39:02

Phill Williams
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Re: for a friend

Hi Tommy, very nice, a little sad but with a positive note for the future.

I notice you mention "song" in there, will we see (or hear) a tune for this?

phill


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#7 2013-05-12 04:41:00

tommydone
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Registered: 2010-02-18
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Re: for a friend

Hey Phil , I wrote these Lyrics over 20 years ago and cant seem to come up with music but I will keep trying

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#8 2013-06-27 13:27:12

judymills
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Re: for a friend

Moving lyrics. Well done!


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#9 2013-06-27 21:01:49

dino48
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Re: for a friend

Good words there,I lost two of my best friends too drugs when I was very young and it hurt bad and made me hate drugs.


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