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#1 2013-01-25 21:12:45

aarbear98
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TITLE:What i'd give no music tho and more comeing

Song 1 Title:What i'd give
I feel like you never even loved me i wanted to say goodbye.your just a blury picter now just a blury picture in my mind

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

Verse.i feel like u just ran away right away from me i wanted to see ur face i was to young to realy understand but its still not to late

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

Bridge.i wish youd understand the way i feel right now but i know now u never will i wish it wasnt r

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

I have more reply if u want some o ya copywrited so dnt try to steal them the feds will get u

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#2 2013-01-25 23:01:03

Phill Williams
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Re: TITLE:What i'd give no music tho and more comeing

hi aarbear98,

nice work. i kinda get the feeling this is meant to be a song, if so i'm sure everyone would like to see the chording. if you haven't written a tune to it you can ask the members if they'd like to put a melody as a collaboration, we've done these many times.

again nice work

phill

PS WE HELP NOT STEAL.


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#3 2013-01-25 23:18:58

aarbear98
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Re: TITLE:What i'd give no music tho and more comeing

Yes plz help me with this so farmusic i only do the chords G C D and Em well i want it a slow song tho ive got

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#4 2013-01-25 23:20:41

aarbear98
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Re: TITLE:What i'd give no music tho and more comeing

Song 1 Title:What i'd give
Softly tho
C C  CDCCGGEm Cgg cc c
I feel like you never even loved me i wanted to say goodbye.your just a blury picter now just a blury picture in my mind

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

Verse.i feel like u just ran away right away from me i wanted to see ur face i was to young to realy understand but its still not to late

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

Bridge.i wish youd understand the way i feel right now but i know now u never will i wish it wasnt r

Course.what i'd give to see you smile
what id give to hear you sing
What id give to see you standing here right next to me
Without you i am alone but with u my half is whole
All i want for u to do is come back to me to me

I have more reply if u want some o ya copywrited so dnt try to steal them the feds will get u

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