Topic: Slaughter of innocents

Recently we had a post discussing the use of  strong  language in songs and  poems, sorry if  this offends any one but I  feel in this case it  warrants the use, so please feel free to insert an appropriate alterative word at the end .

Graham Windle 13 -08-2014

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I like and aperson can insert there own ending.

my papy said son your going too drive me too drinking if you dont stop driving that   Hot  Rod  Lincoln!! Cmdr cody and his lost planet airman

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Some times this is the only way to descibe.
I think the C word really fits in this context!
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I have the utmost respect for your musical abilities and song writing Graham. And this song is very powerful in content and emotion. But speaking only for myself,and I'm no prude by any stretch, I could never use that word in a song or otherwise. For sure not on a family friendly forum.That being said, you are still one of my favorite posters on this site. jmo.
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Thanks for the honest comments ,I knew this would be controversial when I posted this.My emotions were strong when writing and I felt there wasn't another word strong enough in the English language to finish the poem hence the warning at the beginning.

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This is the finished  song ..Again please do not  read  if  you  are easily  offended  by  the  content.

Graham Windle
13 -08-2014

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That says it all Grah

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