Topic: sumthinorother

sit down here woman, we can work this out
a little bit of love and patience
a little bit of time
we can stop all this runnin an cryin
you show me your worst nightmare, ill show you mine

runnin away only works for a time girl
you're runnin away and you dont know what to do
face your problems and look at you shine girl
look at the moon rollin with the tide
cuz runnin from your problems babe is only a lie

ive been roamin this earth for a while now
been roaminn with out a home
gettin by on gettin high and tryin not to be alone
been numbin my senses standin in the rain
lookin for what just may come my way

runnin away only works for a time girl
you're runnin away and dont know what to do
face your problems and look at you shine girl
look at the moon rollin with the tide
cuz runnin from your problems babe is only a lie

singin the blues one brew at a time

Re: sumthinorother

Great work, Punkrawker! You tell a good story, and capture a lot of emotion.

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Re: sumthinorother

Thank you for the feedback Tenement Funster!!

singin the blues one brew at a time

Re: sumthinorother

Great poem punkrawker, I like it and think it would make a fantastic song *nudge nudge* smile