'Broken' by mazzy catseyes

Good to see you`ve got another song.

Thanks easybeat.
Thanks Grah1. I've got this on soundcloud under mazzy catseyes.
It feels like a blues song to me, but I'm not sure my delivery fits into that genre.
Have you any suggestions on how I could make it sound more bluesey - I'm quite new to this.
I dream of waking up to find that I have developed a lovely deep gravelly voice, but I can;t see that happening any time soon

I'd be interested in seeing your interpretation of the song - I'll email you so you can send them to me. Thank you.

Cool - can't wait to hear your version

Grah1 has done an arrangement of my song 'Broken'. Quite a different arrangement - different key, fewer chords, different phrasing, choruses run together as a bridge and a great guitar solo at the end.

We can learn so much from each other here. Thanks for taking the time Grah1 - it's cool.

You can hear his version on my soundcloud - mazzy catseyes.

Here are the chords for his arrangement.

Broken - Words© Marian Kerr, 2015 - this arrangement Grah 1

E                                                                   A
Lyin' all alone on the cold side of the  bed
D                                                                              A
Tryin' to forget those cruel words that were said
A                                                                           E
There's pain in my  heart and tears on my face
E                                                             A
Hurtin' so deep that  time won't erase
D
I never thought that life would  turn out this  way
A                                                                    E
Now it seems there's  no words left to say

A
There's ice in the  place where my  heart used to  be
G
I  never thought you could  stop lovin' me
D                                                              A
I look in the mirror ,and I see only  pain
A
And  wonder if I will ever feel whole
G
Shattered dreams  lie in bits on the  floor
D                                                                     A
I just don't  want this,  heartache any-more

A
I'm lonely
G                       D
Broken and  empty 

A
I'm lonely
G                       D
Broken and  empty 

solo  over  AGD then end

lovely job mazzy, and grah of-course with your own interpretation, can i sense a hemispherical collab coming on here?

ps, it would help less PC silversurfers like moi, if you gave us the link to follow...pleeeese.

phill

Thanks TIGLJK. I appreciate the positive feedback.

Thanks too to Phill. I hadn't put up links to any of my songs because when I signed up it came up with a no-link or get banned sort of message.
Here are the links to my song and Grah1's cover. Hopefully this is okay now.
https://soundcloud.com/mazzy-catseyes/brokenmp3
https://soundcloud.com/mazzy-catseyes/b … r-by-grah1

Thanks for the comments on the songs Strummerboy Bill. I'm enjoying this process very much and the support of this group.

Thank you. (for once I have no more words)

Not at all - I was overcome at your kind words.

Everything is cool - Still friends