1 (edited by mojo01 2016-09-21 01:56:58)

Topic: another one needs a name

https://soundcloud.com/mojo01/no-name
sitting at home alone strumming my guitar and this just kind of came out what do you think? suggestions for a name. if any one is interested ill post the words and chords later

ok here are the words and chords


D                         C                       G               D
I'm sure some where that the sun still shines
I see a ray of hope in the ties that bind
I know somewhere a love still burns
against the storm it still stands firm

chorus
C                 G                   D
hope and promises we keep
as you sow so shall you reap
words that hurt can be so sweet
like an innocent child as she sleeps

D           C                    G                    D
I know somewhere faith is still strong
I'm sure some one still knows right from wrong
I'm sure out there in a world so mean
there is still a place where a child can dream

chorus

I hope that when the time is right
that you and I will see the light
and maybe when the time has come
we wont regret the things we've done

chorus

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Re: another one needs a name

great performance. well done and thanks for sharing. so shall you reap for a title?

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: another one needs a name

ok here are the words and chords

D                         C                       G               D
I'm sure some where that the sun still shines
I see a ray of hope in the ties that bind
I know somewhere a love still burns
against the storm it still stands firm
chorus
C                 G                   D
hope and promises we keep
as you sow so shall you reap
words that hurt can be so sweet
like an innocent child as she sleeps
D           C                    G                    D
I know somewhere faith is still strong
I'm sure some one still knows right from wrong
I'm sure out there in a world so mean
there is still a place where a child can dream
chorus
I hope that when the time is right
that you and I will see the light
and maybe when the time has come
we wont regret the things we've done
chorus

out of tune out of key and out of touch

Re: another one needs a name

Mojo
how about` Hope & Promise` for a title

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Re: another one needs a name

Phill Williams wrote:

great performance. well done and thanks for sharing. so shall you reap for a title?

That's the first thing that came to me as well.

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Re: another one needs a name

Really nice mojo01 .......... i also like the ~ So Shall You Reap~ as the title for this song.  Awesome song smile

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Re: another one needs a name

"Hope on the Horizon"

Re: another one needs a name

You might also consider " A Child Can Dream" .

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

9 (edited by Peatle Jville 2017-01-05 00:29:08)

Re: another one needs a name

Hi, Mojo here is the Jville family doing our version of your fine song. It is not as good the one you put up. But I thought maybe it would be interesting to hear another take on it.
https://soundcloud.com/eatleville/hope

Re: another one needs a name

I've changed my mind. Maybe ; The Sun Still Shines?

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: another one needs a name

Peatle Jville wrote:

Hi, Mojo here is the Jville family doing our version of your fine song. It is not as good the one you put up. But I thought maybe it would be interesting to hear another take on it.
https://soundcloud.com/eatleville/hope

awesome job peatle I really appreciate you taking the time to do one of my songs

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