Topic: Crack

Lyrics in work, this hit me this morning watching interviews with Santana and Bob Wier. (I love AXiS TV) *edited to fit rules

To far to the right, to far to the left
Stand on the crack,
They break your *_______ back

Scared of the dark
Your heart accepts or rejects
Not all that is dark takes you to hell
Many loves crafted in that wishing well.

Wrong or right, It’s a daily fight
Trying to be you without becoming them,
Stand on the crack,
They break your *_______  back

Mal - Well, lady, I must say, you're my kinda stupid.
Mal - Jayne, your mouth is talking. You might wanna look to that
Kaylee - No power in the verse can stop me. BOOK-  you're going to burn in a very special level of hell. A level they reserve for child molesters and people who talk at the theatre.

Re: Crack


very good now, but has so much potential...great start to what will be a terrific poem/ song.
nice one


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Re: Crack

More than a bit of angst there, Beamer ... but I really like it.

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