Topic: Farewell You

This wouldn't work as a song. I wrote it early this morning while thinking about my friend's funeral last Friday. It is a poem that doesn't have much rhyme. I hope it paints a accurate picture of his funeral through my eyes.

                           Farewell You
Here I am  sitting on  a wooden pew .
Here my  friend on a Friday afternoon just for you.
This time  in a church inside a wicker coffin lies you..
Church full to overflowing..
Quietly the funeral director squeezes in late arrivals..
Mourners not a good word for you.
A better word  for you those here to celebrate.
Why not you had a good life.
At the appointed time with the family comfortably seated your only child a grown up son gives the minister a silent nod.
The organist stops playing.
A white robed minister.
looking solemn stands at his pulpit.
He looks a little bit out of place
His space infiltrated by people not usually  part of this place.
People with wet eyes.
Bowed heads in diginified  mourning.
Digging deep some pulling out friendly  smiles.
In a pregnant silence my mind see's a picture of you.
laughing and joking.
It was  just two weeks ago the last time we spoke.
You were enjoying the simple things in life,
With a wit sharpe as a knife, never short of a joke.
Your contagious  generous spirit overflowing.
Not even your heart  in a bad shape could wipe that away.
Your zest for life apparent  each day.
Trying to stop my mind from drifting.
I  focus on the minister's welcome and prayer.
I can feel your spirit  in my mind.
Fighting the desire to turn back time.
My mind returns to this place with stainglass windows..
Now with everyone standing we sing.
 Accompanied by a struggling church organ. 
The hymn Jerusalem is sung from another land.
Only five years previouse you and your wife had visited that place where those feet in ancient times walked upon Englands  mountains green:
Maybe now you are looking down on me while talking  to your ansestors about  Englands pastures you had seen.
My mind wonders how would your Irish, Welsh and Scottish family along with your  Jewish ansestory hear this hymn.
The music comes to a halt.
My backside falls down onto a wooden pew.
Your oldest sister's, time to talk.
She tells us about your growing  years.
I remember us talking about them years, over  beers.
You and I  laughed alot about our  mischievous years..
My mind ticks over as she speaks.
Thinking about your life at its lowest and  highest peaks.
Your sister's words filling my mind like time lapse photography..
Installing remembered stories into us, chapters of  your growing years.
I can't help thinking as she sits down.
It should be appropriate to give huge cheers.  
Applause as a way of thanks for those good years.
Your son and wife takes over sharing with us more insights into your life.
When the Church bursts into laughter.
In my mind I hear your hearty laugh ..
Your cheeky smile comes to mind.
Your  way of making hard work fun.
You made the most of your time.
You wanted lots of laughter here and that is what you got.
You were never a man to stay sad or to ask for a lot.
Your younger brother and one neice honour you
With a  couple of quick funny stories about you.
That's what everyone  loved about you, laughter.
The minister asks us  for a moment to quietly reflect about you.
In my mind I can see you in silence at a beach.
Realing in your fishing line.
Catching fresh fish for a table surrounded by laughter.
Table made for love of life.
Table made for good stories.
I pray in my mind that your quiet faith has delivered your soul to the right place.
After a few quiet moments,
The minister leads us in The lords Prayer.
Our Father, which art in heaven,
Hallowed be thy Name.
The atheist sitting next me has an epiphany.
''First  time that prayer has made sense,'' he quiely whispers to me..
Your casket is then carried from the church.
Through the church sound system we hear the Byrds.
To everything, turn, turn, turn.
There is a season, turn, turn, turn.
And a time to every purpose under heaven.

Re: Farewell You

Wonderful. It had the effect of making me reflect on all the funeral services I've had to attend in the last few years, friends and family alike.

I'm reading this at 8am and I feel a little sad for you losing a dear friend but it sounds like you've excised your emotions with this wonderful piece.

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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Phill it was around 4am this morning I couldn't sleep and my head was thinking about my friend. So I picked up a piece of paper and wrote these words to excise some of my emotions. We shared a similar outlook on life and our humour was the same. Thursday night here for some reason I descided to put these words on here instead of filing them away somewhere to be lost and not shared with anyone else. Thank you for your feed back

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Peatle ... I'm sitting here in tears after reading this. I don't think I've heard or read anything as moving as this in a l-o-n-g time. Your "free verse" format really suits the menagerie of inner thoughts mixed with the funeral's atmosphere.

This is amazing; just wow!

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Peatle you cant make that stuff up it comes from the heart and soul and that makes its special. I raise a toast to your friend and to you.

out of tune out of key and out of touch

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Gidday Peatle
the imagery  is terrific,i feel that i`m in the church with you.
I`m glad you didn`t `file it away `
this is one fantastic bit of writing,i`m pleased you didn`t try
to & make it rhyme,i  think often that cheapens the sentiment.

The King Of Audio Torture

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Peatle, that was very touching and so well written, thank you for sharing it with us and so glad you wrote your thoughts down smile

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Thank you everyone I am pleased my writing has delivered what I was going through in a way that you good people got. With a cup of tea in my hand I toast the life of my friend who passed away. I am honoured also  to have you good Chordie folk in my life.
He aha te mea nui o te ao
What is the most important thing in the world?
He tangata, he tangata, he tangata
It is the people, it is the people, it is the people.
A New Zealand  Maori  Proverb.

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Peatle

Very, Very heart wrenching and soul searching stuff.

I so dislike attending funerals.... they have this finality to them that I abhor.

Your words are so  on point -  excellent stuff.
jim

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

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Peatle Jville  When I started reading your poem I read it three times before I could keep a dry  eyes enough to thank you for sharing it.  Any one who has lost a parents or friends can relate to Farewell You. It simply is magical as written

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

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Jim and Classical Guitar thank you.
A friend of mine has a photograph taken ten years ago of a social club we both belonged to. There are sixteen people in the photo of which there are only six of us alive today.
As the people in that photo pass away the more valuable that photo becomes to him. I guess when we die the real value in our life is the good memories we leave behind.