Ok...... I am in catch up mode with songs.  I have put up my attempt at the song `Cloak of Invisibility`.  It was a little bit of a rush job, so the beginning is a bit to fast and i did hit a bum note lol.  Guitar playing not the best either but i enjoyed trying to play and sing this one.  I like the meaning behind it.  Wouldn't mind improving on this one when i get the time.  https://soundcloud.com/ukulelejan/cover … visibility

(Edit by Jandle to add sound cloud link)

So starting off with:

Zurf ..........on Cloak of Invisibilty ....... you picked your guitar so well in this song, really good and a good performance by you.
Zurf ....... on Mother (a Punks Version)...... I loved how you played this on your guitar, it was awesome.

Roger ...... on Cloak of Invisibilty ....  very heartfelt version, can hear it in your version of this song.
Rgoer ..... on Mother .........  i liked how you performed this song and your arrangement of it.

Beamer ...... on Mother (Acoustic Version) ........I liked this version the best of your two versions,  it suited your voice and it just worked ... PLUS i did hear and liked the added heart pulse and line at the end.
Beamer .... on MOther (Heavy) .... though i am not into heavy metal or heavy music, i expected it of you and you did it justice, well done.

Beamer great to see also you have commented on people`s versions of your songs....................... Grah wondering where your comments are and what your thinking of peoples versions of your song?

I also commented on both songs, but I think the heavy one may not have gone through.  The heavy feels like it needs drums to be more complete, but the acoustic feels complete as is.  I personally enjoyed the acoustic more, but I like how the heavier versions lyrics flow better (like Zurf said above).    I still WILL at some point get to my pitiful version.  LOL!  I PROMISE!!!

Zurf wrote:

beamer wrote:

Ok. I just gotta be forthright, cause no one has said anything about it,  Did anyone feel my heart beat and flatline effect added a twist to the perception of the song? Because at first you think your hearing about a survivor then we learn she lost the battle.

No. I didn't pick up on that.

Well,  ------------!  I spent a lot of time finding the soundbites and clipping them down, hoping to add a twist to the song.   LOL Well ok since no one seems to have noticed,  I guess it was not called for, or no one listens that far.

That's the way it goes. The extra little bits are always the most time consuming and difficult.

beamer wrote:

Ok. I just gotta be forthright, cause no one has said anything about it,  Did anyone feel my heart beat and flatline effect added a twist to the perception of the song? Because at first you think your hearing about a survivor then we learn she lost the battle.

No. I didn't pick up on that.

Well,  ------------!  I spent a lot of time finding the soundbites and clipping them down, hoping to add a twist to the song.   LOL Well ok since no one seems to have noticed,  I guess it was not called for, or no one listens that far.

Ok. I just gotta be forthright, cause no one has said anything about it,  Did anyone feel my heart beat and flatline effect added a twist to the perception of the song? Because at first you think your hearing about a survivor then we learn she lost the battle.

No. I didn't pick up on that.

Gidday Beamer
much prefer the acoustic version,it`s got everything going for it.

Thanks, though I know the heavy one can be better, I tried to do it to a drum loop at 110 BPM but kept getting lost either vocally or rhythmically. and said  to heck with it.  I do better with a live drummer who can judge my pace and then we lock in and i then can listen to him.

That acoustic was done just sitting at the desk and phone right in front of me