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Thanks Pete!     

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I wrote this as a poem yesterday and decided to turn it into a song so here it is. https://soundcloud.com/jets60/across-the-equator

Across the Equator Jeff Gilpin


~


Intro fingerpicking G


~


[G]I’ve never had the chance to travel


A[D]cross the equator


[C]I’ve spent my whole lifetime


In the [G]northern hemisphere


It’s [G]not for fear of traveling


Or a [D]lack of desire


I’ve just [C]never gotten the chance to travel


A[D]cross the e[G]quator


~


[G]Maybe someday I’ll get to travel


To the [D]southern hemisphere


And [C]go and see the places there


And [G]meet people there too


I’d [G]love to share with all of them


The [D]stories that I know


And [C]maybe I’ll learn what’s going on


A[D]cross the e[G]quator


~



I'm [D]sure a lot I learn will a[G]stound me


And I’m [Em]sure I’ll learn things that I never [G]knew


I’m [D]sure they'll teach me things


That I’ve [G]never even considered


And [C]maybe I could teach them something [D]too


~


[G]If I get the chance to travel


A[D]cross the equator


[C]I’ll keep my eyes wide open and


My [G]mind wide open too


The [G]other side of the world is


Just a [D]side I’ve never tried yet


But [C]one day I hope to travel


A[D]cross the e[G]quator


~


Repeat chorus & last verse


repeat last two lines of the verse to end


fade fingerpicking G



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Thanks Pete - I had heard that but the video brings it home. Gave me a chuckle. smile     

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Thank you, Phill. I hope so too.     

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Something I wrote today. Might just turn it into a song...we'll see.

Across the Equator - Jeff Gilpin

I’ve never had the chance to travel
Across the equator
I’ve spent my whole lifetime
In the northern hemisphere
It’s not for fear of traveling
Or a lack of desire
I’ve just never gotten the chance to travel
Across the equator

Maybe someday I’ll get to travel
To the southern hemisphere
To go and see the places there
And meet people there too
I’d love to share with all of them
The stories that I know
And maybe I’ll learn what’s going on
Across the equator

I'm sure a lot I learn will astound me
And I’m sure I’ll learn things that I never knew
I’m sure they'll teach me things
That I’ve never even thought of
And maybe I could teach them something too

If I get the chance to travel
Across the equator
I’ll keep my eyes wide open and
My mind wide open too
The other side of the world is
Just a side I’ve never tried yet
But one day I hope to travel
Across the equator 

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Thank you Jim. Yep, you caught my message. smile     

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Hey Jim - I finally got some time to check out your new song. I enjoyed the chords and the lyrics. Reminded me of the days when the great songwriters were finding themselves and polishing their craft. To me, when I tried it out it, I played it relaxed and unforced. Well done. I'm looking forward to hearing your recording so I'll know how close I came.     

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Thanks Jan. I promise to toast your husband the next time I'm sipping.     

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Thanks Jan.     

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Interesting ideas Brian. Thanks for sharing.     

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Thanks Phill - I've got to kick back in a lower gear now and then. smile     

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Thanks Phill     

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Thanks Pete     

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Thanks Jim!     

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Here's a song I wrote a while back (2/18/2021) and finally got around to recording. https://soundcloud.com/jets60/sometimes-i-feel-1

Sometimes I feel Jeff Gilpin


~


Intro fingerpicking G


~


Some[G]times I feel that


I [Em]don’t know what I’m doing


And I [G]worry that all I’m doing


Is [D]coming out all wrong


Some[G]times I feel that


[Em]Everything I’m doing


Is [C]not going to workout


When [D]I get to the [G]end


~


But [D]then I get going


And I feel [Em]better


So I [G]keep pressing on


And [D]start hit my stride


[Em]Then I feel like


I can do [G]anything


[C]Anything at [D]all


~


Some[G]times I feel that


I [Em]don’t know where I’m going


[G] Like I’m just sitting there


And [D]spinning my wheels


Some[G]times I feel that


No [Em]matter which direction


I [C]turn will be the wrong way


And end up [D]stuck at a dead [G]end



~


But [D]then I get going


And I feel [Em]better


So I [G]keep pressing on


And [D]start hit my stride


[Em]Then I feel like


I can go [G]anywhere


[C]Anywhere at [D]all


~


Some[G]times I feel that


It [Em] isn’t worth the effort


That [G]all the sweat and blood


I put in will [D]never be enough


Some[G]times I feel that


The [Em]harder that I try


I [C]fall further behind


Until I’m [D]back to the be[G]gin


~


But [D]then I get going


And I feel [Em]better


So I [G]keep pressing on


And [D]start hit my stride


[Em]Then I feel like


I can do [G]anything


[C]Anything at [D]all ... [G]



 

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Thanks Pete and Phill. Funny joke Pete. smile     

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Thanks Brian - I had fun with this one.     

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New song I wrote today.
https://soundcloud.com/jets60/sip-a-little-whiskey

Sip a Little Whiskey Jeff Gilpin


~


Intro G D


~


[Am7]A cool sip of water


Or a [G]sip of hot coffee [D]too


[Am7]Both tickle my tastebuds


[G]When I want them [D]to


[Am7]Depending on the mood I’m in


Or [G]if I’m in the [D]mood


[G]I’ll sip a little [D]whiskey


That’ll [Am7]do


~


[Am7]I don’t sip to get drunk


[G]I just like the [D]taste


The [Am7]subtle hints of flavor


My [G]tastebuds try and [D]trace


That [Am7]smokey burning sensation


A [G]touch of honey [D]too


[G]Sipping a little [D]whiskey


That’ll [Am7]do


~


[C]I don’t sip alone


And [G]I won’t sip to long


I [D]definitely don’t sip when I’m [Am7]down


[C]I make sure I’m able



To [G]walk away from the table


And [D]put the bottle away


[E]For another [E7]day


~


[Am7]It might take a little while


[G]Before I think a[D]bout


That [Am7]pungent taste of whiskey


A [G]month or more but I [D]doubt it


[Am7]And then I’ll begin


[G]Thinking about what to [D]do


[G]Maybe sip a little [D]whiskey


That’ll [Am7]do


~


Solo on bridge chords C G D Am7 C G D E E7


~


[Am7]A cool sip of water


Or a [G]sip of hot coffee [D]too


[Am7]Both tickle my tastebuds


[G]When I want them [D]to


[Am7]Depending on the mood I’m in


Or [G]if I’m in the [D]mood


[G]I’ll sip a little [D]whiskey


That’ll [Am7]do



 

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Hey Phill - I enjoyed your additions and agree. There has been so much to love about Chordie over the years and much we all wish we could have passed on by. I also know those days might not be coming back so I'll tend to overlook the not-so-fun times if I may. I am sorry I wasn't able to get your verses into my song version (posted a few days earlier), but they would have fit well, and if you want you can make a new extended version.     

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Thanks very much Jan!     

Thanks Jan!     

Thanks Pete     

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Thanks Pete     

Recorded and Uploaded - https://soundcloud.com/jets60/i-miss-th … die-hopped     

I sure will