cool thanks!!! i would love to be able to play your songs but im not very good at guitar..as people say though practise makes perfect so i will get those chords someday
52 2007-06-10 23:47:20
Re: The Sleepy Time Song (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
lol that is pretty funny!! but i also agree with old doll this song is great!!! keep going i hope i can write songs as good as all you on chordie on day!!
love Rhiannon xoxoxoxo
53 2007-06-10 00:53:48
Re: My old doll (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thankyou all roger i give you a big hug to!! lol Old doll im glad you liked this song
thanks alot lovin you always!
Rhiannon xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
54 2007-06-09 08:23:01
Re: My Good Friend (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
you deserve this roger!! u have been there for a while now!!
love you look at my new song "My old doll" and tell me what you think
love Rhiannon xoxoxoxoxoxo
55 2007-06-09 08:21:51
Topic: My old doll (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
MY OLD DOLL
VERSE 1
I used to dream of someone
Someone sweet and full of love
But I couldn’t find anyone
Not even my mom
CHORUS 1
I looked everywhere
And I couldn’t find her
Until one day she replied
With god blessing the earth
I am now in her garden
A beautiful pink bloom
Which she will look after
And I love her too
VERSE 2
I love her to death
She is such a dear
I wish I could tell her
How I feel
CHORUS 2
Im wishing that she will pray
For me, my mom and ma dad
Seeing her words on my songs
Makes me feel really proud
I love her with my heart
I wish she could understand
My love for everyone will never die
Love is to strong to put into words
VERSE 3
I used to dream of someone
Someone sweet and full of love
I couldn’t find anyone
Except for old doll
Old doll i hope you like this as much as roger like his...
love you always!
Rhiannon xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
56 2007-06-09 01:50:31
Topic: My Good Friend (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
GOOD FRIEND
CHORUS 1
You helped me in everyway possible
You wrote to me in email again
You showed me what to do on chordie
Sometimes I wish you were here
VERSE 1
Hey I remember the first time we talked
I posted a song, you helped me along
And then I gave you my email address
And then we became good friends!
CHORUS 2
I will always remember you roger
You are now my pretend grandfather
But we live so far away from eachother
And I wonder if we will ever meet
VERSE 2
Im so glad that we met
Im hoping that you feel the same
I wish that I could see your face
And I wish that you could see mine
CHORUS 1
You helped me in everyway possible
You wrote to me in email again
You showed me what to do on chordie
Sometimes I wish you were here
BRIDGE
Im hoping that one day I will go to your place
So that you can see the woman I’ve become
I just hope that you will know who I am
So that you can just remember me….
CHORUS 1
You helped me in everyway possible
You wrote to me in email again
You showed me what to do on chordie
Sometimes I wish you were here
This song is dedicated to the one and only ROGERGUPPY!!!!!
Hope you like it roger!!
love your pretend grandaughter!
Rhiannon xoxoxoxoxo
57 2007-06-09 00:50:04
Re: Hurtful (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
dear old doll,
you did not have to plant a flower for me!!! im absolutely flattered that you chose pink for me to as i adore pink!! it is my favourite colour!! im definately 13, but im turning 14 in july. I would love to write a song about you as it would be a delightful topic! im also writing a song about my good friend/ pretend grandfather rogerguppy!
loving you always and will post a new song soon!!
love you Rhiannon xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo ♥♥♥
58 2007-06-06 04:34:44
Re: Hurtful (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I just started writing about a month ago, how long you been writing?? I will keep writing, but I dont know if i wil keep singing, Thanks for the complements! Oh and jasonhague321 do you have a email address that is not on this?? i would like to email you some of my songs personally
thanks and love you all
Rhiannon xoxoxoxoxo
59 2007-06-05 07:17:29
Re: Hurtful (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
so do i so dont feel bad!! hehe lol 
writing songs are a good way of relieving yourself of guilt and stuff, dont ya think??
60 2007-06-05 01:31:44
Re: Hurtful (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I feel there is something wrong with the lyrics, i dont know why but maybe there is something about the chorus and the fourth verse. If you could help me maybe it could be a better song with a guys touch, especially someone who is more experienced with this kind of problem. Thanks alot,
Loving you guys with all my heart, may god smile upon you.
Love Rhiannon xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
61 2007-06-02 02:04:20
Topic: Hurtful (10 replies, posted in Songwriting)
HURTFUL
VERSE 1
Im sitting here today
Feeling like I don’t belong
I try to move away
I guess im not that strong
VERSE 2
They try to make me happy
I guess I can’t believe
Why is it always me?
The always try to deceive
CHORUS
I don’t belong here
I only stay to see you
I can’t believe im here
I only wanna be with you
But it’s never gonna happen
As im to stupid to know
That you would only play me
Why is that so hurtful?
VERSE 3
I don’t know why
Im feeling so sad
I start to cry
Im feeling quite mad
VERSE 4
He pulls me close
And asks me what is wrong
I take another dose
Of his sugar sweet love
CHORUS
I don’t belong here
I only stay to see you
I cant believe im here
I will never be with you
But one day will it happen?
Im to dump to think
That would you treat me right
Why is everything so hurtful?
Would this be hurtful?
This song can be played with any chords, I have not posted any as i can not make up my mind which ones i would like.
God bless you, Love to you all
Rhiannon xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo
62 2007-06-02 02:02:19
Re: Come Home Melisa (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
This song has so much feeling which is great, i would also like to hear it as i have also played it. Keep going with writing songs, its a natural talent for you
love to you and god bless everyone
Rhiannon xoxoxoxo
63 2007-05-31 06:51:03
Re: i have a problem !!! (4 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I totally agree with james, i just started up a band and my boyfriends the drummer. we had a fall out and now he doesnt want to play the drums so we just found a new drummer! if that girls a good singer let her in the guy can get over himself!! let her in and find a new drummer!!
64 2007-05-29 23:49:22
Re: Memories (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
i have already told my parents about chordie and the posts and they agreed that i should put my songs and get song off this site...thanks for the concern
love to you all
Rhiannon xoxo
65 2007-05-29 23:43:02
Re: Memories (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
i have already told my parents about chordie and the posts and they agreed that i should put my songs and get song off this site...thanks for the concern
love to you all
Rhiannon xoxo
66 2007-05-25 01:16:58
Re: Memories (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
ummm thanks alot but i really cant be that good...i just really like writing songs! and im glad that you like it!! i am making chords and i think that maybe you will like the pattern
Cheers Rhiannon xoxo
67 2007-05-19 07:10:26
Re: how the hell do i write a decient song AND lyrics!!! (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
plz dont worry!! im only a beginner as well but if i were you think of a tune first!! its how i do it...and if it sounds like a different song than try it again, also think of what strumming pattern you would like, dont do lyrics straight up because if you think of a tune some lyrics dont fit.
hope everything works out!!
goodluck Rhiannon aka hinder_rox07
68 2007-05-19 07:06:35
Topic: Memories (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
heya guys this is my third song i wrote and it is about war, during the war of gallipoli and australia. i hope you like it and plz post back and help me with it if you dont like it.
MEMORIES by Rhiannon Gilson a.k.a hinder_rox07
VERSE 1
I don’t wanna miss you even more
(Than I already do)
Even though you’re gone from here
(Im still in love with you)
I remember when you whispered in my ear
(I won’t be far, never fear)
CHORUS
Cos they, took you away from me
For some stupid war in Gallipoli
You should have stayed here
Now I drown in sorrow
For a man I’ll never see
VERSE 2
I’m wondering why I cry
(Is it really that bad?)
You write to me love notes
(It makes me really sad)
I just wanna hear your voice
(And to hear you say my name)
CHORUS
BRIDGE
I don’t understand
Why you had to go
Fighting bout nothing
It’s not even your war
But lest we forget
I will march for you
And all of your friends
All I have left is memories
CHORUS (x2)
Hello Memories
69 2007-05-12 06:11:03
Re: finally, my first posted song (: (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
i totally agree with james!! this song is very very good!!! i would love to show u some of my songs sometimes to but yours is awsome!!!
Keep going Kori!!
luv Rhiannon
70 2007-03-25 03:48:55
Topic: New Songs (3 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Hey guys i would love to see ur new songs that u have wrote and i would like to show u mine! Please send them to me at <a href="mailto:wantedxoxo@hotmail.com" target="_blank">wantedxoxo@hotmail.com</a>
thanks Hinder_rox07
Here is one of them Called:
Heaven's Too Farby Rhiannon Gilson
Intro:. . .[G] . . .[C]. . .[G]. . .[Em] . . .
Verse 1:
[G]There was a [Em]time when I felt [Am]loved,
[C](Maybe, any-[Am]way),
[G]But then you [Em]left me for someone [Am]else,
[C](You made me [Am]cry),
[G]So you were [Em]just using [Am]me?
[C](I [G]can't believe [Em]you).
CHORUS:
[Em]Heaven's too [Am]far from here,
[C]Oh can't you [G]see,
[Em]Heaven's too [Am]far for me,
[C]Why don't you love [G]me?
Verse 2:
[G]You took me [Em]out and we went on a [Am]date,
[C](I won't forget that [Am]time),
[G]We went to [Em]movies and all other [Am]things,
[C](Funny, how you made me [Am]laugh),
[G]You just told [Em]me that you had a [Am]dream,
[C](About us, [G]I never [Em]knew).
CHORUS 2:
[Em]Heaven's too [Am]far from here,
[C]Oh can't you [G]see,
[Em]Heaven's too [Am]far for me,
[C]To say I love [G]you, for ever more.
Verse 3: (Softer tone)
[G]Now you must [Em]promise me one [Am]thing,
[C](That you will always love [Am]me),
[G]And that one [Em]day we will [Am]sing,
[C](Together in hea-[Am]ven),
[G]Now I must [Em]go coz my [Am]prayer,
[C](Has just [G]end-[Em]ed).
CHORUS 1:
[Em]Heaven's too [Am]far from here,
[C]Oh can't you [G]see,
[Em]Heaven's too [Am]far for me,
[C]Why don't you love [G]me?
Verse 4:
[G]I love you; [Em]I love you for-[Am]ever
[C]But you slipped away from [Am]me
[G](And you [Em]just don't [Am]care)
[C]I know that you don't want [Am]me
[G](Any [Em]more, any-[Am]way)
[C]No one will care bout [Am]me
[G]No more, [Em]no more, no [Am]more
[C]No more [G]hea-[Em]ven.
Chorus 3:
[Em]No kisses [Am]in the night
[C]No more hea-[G]ven
[Em]In the [Am]starlight
[C]Heaven's just too [G]far
Hope you like it
Rhiannon (hinder_rox07)
71 2007-03-24 23:08:09
Re: oh why cant i? (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
this song is soo amazing! i love the lyrics!! if you would like to share somemore of your songs with me i will share some of mine!!
thanks
Hinder_rox07
72 2007-03-24 06:08:45
Topic: New song (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
heya guys i have made a new song called "Heaven's to far and i would like you all to have it i will post the chords and lyrics soon. this song could go to any tune so go and make one up...be creative!!!
luv ya lots!!
Hinder_rox07
73 2007-03-18 07:07:04
Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!! (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
<img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_smile.gif" border=0 alt="Smile"> dont worry roger...we all have those moments and im a natural blonde!!! lol so dont worry!! i always forget things to...lol <img src="images/smiley_icons/icon_biggrin.gif" border=0 alt="Very Happy">
74 2007-03-16 06:49:29
Re: My Best friend's and my song we made up together!! (14 replies, posted in Songwriting)
thank you very much roger this backing track is great! and i love the style especially since im only a teenager!! its great really!!
hinder_rox07
75 2007-03-15 09:01:06
Re: Best Band Ever!!!!!!! You choose and share you're thoughts!!!!! (231 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
hi...i think the best band would have to be the dixie chicks...either them or Hinder.