Jan
thats great,i really like the way you wrote it as a conversation.
good to see a poem on CSOM
51 2023-11-16 19:04:15
Re: November 2023 FSOTM: Words from a site (27 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
52 2023-11-15 09:04:37
Re: November 2023 FSOTM: Words from a site (27 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Neo
I hear your frustration.
although there are heaps of words to choose from
i just dont have any that fit.
53 2023-11-09 19:05:12
Re: Tooth Fairy (5 replies, posted in Poems)
Aaaww, poor kid! When I was loosing my milk teeth, I got just 3 pence a tooth! I think my grandkids get up to £5.00! I knew I was born too soon.
Here is my answer to Brian's poem from the other point of view...
Me bruvver ith tho nathty
He pulled all my tooffs out
He that upon my chetht
And wouldn't let me shout
He thead he'd share da munny
And buy me lots of toffee
So I'm really so upset wivv im
He never gave me any
Phill thats fantistac im pleased to see it got your writing and posting.
54 2023-11-09 01:30:59
Topic: Tooth Fairy (5 replies, posted in Poems)
thanks for giving me the idea guys.
Tooth Fairy
mum told me about the tooth fairy
it sounded kinda funny
but it seemed an easy way
of making lots of money
but there was a problem
i really like my teeth
ENTER little brother!
i pinned him to the floor
pliers in hand i set to work
and pulled out most his teeth
it took quite a while
he can still talk
but i think i ruined his smile
HEY easy money
55 2023-11-08 23:58:22
Re: The Haircut (8 replies, posted in Poems)
Phill
no this is all made up,but no doubt its happened to someone.
Peatle did some quick sketches to go with a couple of these poems
i love what he did,sometimes an illustration takes it to another level.
56 2023-11-08 05:57:35
Re: The Haircut (8 replies, posted in Poems)
Tig
thanks for the correction ``where``,great to have a teacher doing the edit.
got heaps more of these silly kids poems.
57 2023-11-08 00:30:45
Topic: The Haircut (8 replies, posted in Poems)
just another silly kids poem
The Haircut
My big brother needed a haircut
i told him i could help
i sat him in a chair
and shaved all his scalp
when he looked in the mirror
he cried where is all my hair
i pointed at the floor
it was all around the chair
he said he would complain to mum
hey we can`t have that
so i told him
your hair will regrow
in the meantime
wear a hat
58 2023-11-07 00:09:16
Re: Suggestions - FSOTM December 2023 (10 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Christmas
Christmas
Christmas
Christmas
59 2023-10-24 00:47:09
Topic: Kids Poem (4 replies, posted in Poems)
I always get great poem replies to these kids poems
i look forward to this one getting your brains and keyboard working.
Grandads Computer
grandads not good with computers
he always makes mistakes
he goes red in the face
and says naughty words
i try to help him
though im 5 years old
oh but my grandad
he just wont be told
grandads got a new cellphone
OH NO
more naughty words
60 2023-10-01 20:08:21
Re: Close Your Eyes (6 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Tig
i must look up that chord.good to see you still writing.
you been quiet lately.well done on this one.
61 2023-09-25 23:36:25
Topic: Ham ( A Peatle & Easy production) (5 replies, posted in Poems)
Peatle and i having a bit of fun on a wet day.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AQDcEJSL59k
62 2023-09-21 20:46:08
Re: Engelbert The Cat (8 replies, posted in Poems)
Tig
thank you soooooooo much for your comments.
i was all keen to put these poems into a book,but then got a couple
of negative comments that set me back.i thought hey maybe they
dont work like i thought.i have written a lot more,perhaps ill push on now.
63 2023-09-14 19:54:39
Re: Robot (9 replies, posted in Poems)
Peatle and Phill really really good poems.thx
64 2023-09-14 00:36:47
Re: Robot (9 replies, posted in Poems)
I usually read your songs and poems, but don't usually reply - but ... this one is good!!
Cheers
Richard
Neo
as you know a bit of feedback(good or bad) encourages us to keep posting.
for this reason i always comment to others contributions.
65 2023-09-13 09:36:08
Topic: Robot (9 replies, posted in Poems)
another kids poem
Robot
I am a robot I am a robot
granddad said
as he walked across the floor
with a cardboard box
on his head
he walked into a door
he took off the box
and rubbed at his bruise
a little cut and a bit of blood
wouldn`t slow him down
yesterday he got lots more injuries
when he was dressed up as a clown
66 2023-09-11 21:45:43
Topic: Engelbert The Cat (8 replies, posted in Poems)
lately ive been writing lots of kid type poems,having a blast doing it.
Engelbert The Cat
Engelbert was a cat
he was black as coal
and he was a wee bit naughty
because he always stole
in his night time wanderings
around our neighbourhood
things had disappeared
from places he has stood
now you may think its funny
but not to the lady from next door
for Engelbert stole all her left socks
shes now only got right ones in her drawer
rags slippers and scarves
and today he bought home a hat
this is the life of living with
a kleptomania cat
67 2023-08-15 01:11:56
Re: The Chinese Bike (4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
It says it is not found
i deleted it due to lack of interest.
68 2023-08-14 20:22:35
Re: August 2023 FSOTM: Ticket, Memory, Water, Winter, Wine, Picture (42 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Grah
its great to see you commenting,
69 2023-08-13 05:16:23
Re: August 2023 FSOTM: Ticket, Memory, Water, Winter, Wine, Picture (42 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/heaters-on
banged out a quicky to support csom used the word ``winter``
70 2023-08-12 00:05:48
Re: August 2023 FSOTM: Ticket, Memory, Water, Winter, Wine, Picture (42 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
looks good Tig,you cant go wrong doing Buddy Holly
71 2023-08-11 03:07:57
Re: Billy Playing Blues Guitar (7 replies, posted in Poems)
great poem Peatle,you gave me an idea.
i was standing at the bus stop
everyone had their heads down
and i wondered
is there something on the ground
then i realised they were all looking at their phones
i had to laugh,when i looked again
because im living in the past still using a pen
although i had to confess to this tech bunch
my phone was at home
id used it to post an exciting selfie
of me and my lunch
72 2023-08-10 21:13:23
Re: August 2023 FSOTM: Ticket, Memory, Water, Winter, Wine, Picture (42 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
well done Neo,good to see some life back in ``song of the mth``
perhaps ill bang one out.
73 2023-08-10 21:08:42
Re: Billy Playing Blues Guitar (7 replies, posted in Poems)
brilliant as always !
74 2023-08-03 20:46:01
Re: August 2023 FSOTM: Ticket, Memory, Water, Winter, Wine, Picture (42 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Ok guys,to support CSoM ill see what i can come up with.
thx
75 2023-08-03 00:23:05
Re: SUGGESTIONS: JULY 2023 – YOU THE MEMBERS CHOOSE THE WORDS (13 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Neo
it would be good if you helped Jan
its great to have a challenge,a reason to write a song.
but with 2 mths gone by now,i haven`t had reason to write something.
and of course i love hearing what others have come up with.