2,801

(5 replies, posted in Poems)

Its not unreasonable to keep things simple.
Give it a little space.
Keep it nice and simple.
Just a couple of chords should work for you.
Depth and substance will bring it through.
Sing it from the heart that will tear them apart.
Depth and substance that's what you need to get the song through.
You don't need a lot of chords just a nice melody.
Keep it simple it should work for you.
Depth and substance it will always come through.
Give it plenty of space you don't need a lot of chords.
Keep it nice and simple it should work for you.
Give them your heart to tear them apart.
Depth and substance will lift the ceiling when you sing to.
Give it all your best parts but keep it simple.
You don't need lots of chords just a simple melody.
Depth and substance will work for you.
Depth and substance.

2,802

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I hope people who read this post take the time to check out Kiki Jan on soundcloud. Kiki is not only a talented song writer, she also has does great cover songs by not so well known song writers. Jan you are a excellent observer of nature and the human world using music.

2,803

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Great comical take on the subject of Rock stardom. To the people out there reading this post check his soundcloud contributions.

2,804

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Your song tells it perfectly.

2,805

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I would love to hear this done with a group of voices. On the G and F chords Bass voices at the start of each line. ON the second half of the lines singing words like hero's in our mist alto or soprano voices. And maybe a couple lines of narration with a deep voice. Excellent lyrics could be presented in numerous and exciting ways. Its was a day embedded in the many Wellingtonians memories who were around at that time of this disaster. Another idea I had is dividing the song into male and female vocals.

2,806

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Clever lyrics using tennis as an analogy.