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Topic: TRANSGRESSIONS

No music yet,,, or why else would it be in here?  As you know many of my writings come from things affecting me at the moment. to certain people this is really a tattle tale on myself.  to others  it is whatever you want it to be.

Old transgressions
No longer want to hide
To those agreements
None will abide

Past and present
Starting to collide
All of my paths
No longer side by side

Running, for my life
Tripping and crawling
I hear them calling
TO HELL WITH THE FALLING

My deadly sins are haunting me
Like a head-on collision
Smashing face to face
Into reality

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)
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Re: TRANSGRESSIONS

wow strong stuff,well written

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Re: TRANSGRESSIONS

Powerful words, Beamer ... I once read somewhere that the premiere cause of non-genetic mental illness is guilt.

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Re: TRANSGRESSIONS

If only drinking would only target and kill  those cells that store that nasty stuff in our brain  smile

Well done Beamer - emotional and straight to the point

Jim

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Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

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5 Reply by Classical Guitar (edited by Classical Guitar 2018-04-20 23:36:52)

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Re: TRANSGRESSIONS

Beamer another great poem that says something different to each that reads it. Well done. Waiting for you next one.

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.
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Re: TRANSGRESSIONS

Beamer you words are gold.

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Re: TRANSGRESSIONS

Made some additions last night.


Old transgressions
No longer want to hide
To those agreements
None will abide

Those roads crossed so many years ago,
Straightened out,  and side by side
Found their way back 
and I wanted to take that ride

The hell hound has caught my trail
I try to run but to no avail

Past and present
Starting to collide
All of my paths
No longer side by side

The hell hound has caught my trail
I try to run but to no avail

Running, for my life
Tripping and crawling
I hear them calling
TO HELL WITH THE FALLING

My deadly sins are haunting me
Like a head-on collision I cannot see
Smashing face to face
Into reality

The hell hound has caught my trail
I try to run but to no avail

They don’t know who I am
Just the scent of the past and the taste of my blood
Time to face what’s come of me
I will survive,  that’s who I am!

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)
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Re: TRANSGRESSIONS

I feel used and abused....."why else would I write in here?" Tut tut tut!!! No only joking. It reads like you're running away from some misdeed you perpatrated in your youth?
So when can we expect the recording?

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

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Re: TRANSGRESSIONS

I look forward to  hearing the recording.