3,101

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

a nice tale and very true.

i've played many a wedding party with mixed audiences and it always seems to be the oldies that get up and shake their booty especially to the faster songs. i guess i'm not the oldest rocker in town?

3,102

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i like it. a good cowboy story.

what sort of beat do you use? i tried it with both waltz and 4/4 and it worked with both.

ps dont tell anyone,but i dont know much of dylan's work.

phill

3,103

(3 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I was messing with some rhythms on my keyboard wen I found a country/rock beat that I liked, so I hit a few chords which were "same old same same old" (A-D-E) then somehow a G got in there which stirred the juices and this got written in a couple of hours (breaks in between for food and stuff) hope you like it, I think it's got a kind of line dance feel, thoughts please.

Don't Waste Time.Undefined


[A] This will hurt me more than it will you.


You wont believe it now but it's [D] true. [Daug]


We were [G] never meant to [E] last.


But the [A] end came `round too [F#m] fast.


So don't [D] waste too much [E] time feeling [A] blue.






I didn't think you'd fall in love so fast.


I've been in love before and he hurt me [D] bad. [Daug]


All I [G] wanted was some [E] fun.


But [A] now I've got to [F#m] run.


So [D] don't waste too much [E] time feeling [A] sad.






[D] Don't waste too much time feeling [A] sad.


There's [D] lots of girls out [Bm] there to make you [E] glad. [E7]


I'm [A] sure a girl will come along for you.



You're the nicest guy I've known and that's the [D] truth. [Daug]


But [G] nice is not for [E] me.


She [A] said as she walked [F#m] free.


[D] Don't waste too much [E] time feeling [A] blue.-[E]


(SOLO)






[D] Don't waste too much time feeling [A] blue.


There's [D] lots of girls out [Bm] there looking for [E] you. [E7]


So she [A] kissed me on the cheek and wiped a tear.


I'll have to muddle on with her not [D] here. [Daug]


Once [G] more in my [E] life.


A [A] girl has knocked my [F#m] pride.


So [D] I wont waste no [E] time give me a [A] beer.


So [D] I wont waste no [E] time, another [A] beer. [F#m]


So [D] I wont waste no [E] time give me a [A] beer.


3,104

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

i bet they were quick enough to look at the gore?

very powerful piece of work grah, whether as a song or a very fine piece of poetry.

phill

3,105

(4 replies, posted in Poems)

am i to understand you've got a small bum brian?

it's very funny, but i hope you don't mean you're going to stop writing? though you are right, when you put your stuff up in public, it is like walking naked. i hope the people that just read without commenting can understand that all we want is encouragement.

KEEP IT UP.

phill

3,106

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i am overwhelmed and overcome, seriously overwhelmed and overcome, in all honesty this is the last song on the CD (i just wanted to finish it off) so it's not (in my opinion) as good as some of the others.

russ, i'm getting the hang of the DP24 now so that helps.

ed, i didn't realize the billy joel connection, i'll have to go back and give it another listen!

thanks amy, i cant play sax, each time i blow i see stars...

artie & dino, thanks for the comments and for listening.

love to all

phill

3,107

(14 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

nice. got to say, in the first couple of photos it looks like one of those plastic guitars you give your kids for Christmas, but as you come closer to finishing it, especially the green colour makes it look really "super". congrats

3,108

(8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

lucky they didn't do a post mortem isn't it?

3,109

(6 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

they were one of my favs back in the 60's and 70's. i watched a programme about them on sky arts 1 a few weeks back, really enlightening.

3,110

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks guys, it's nice to feel the support from you guys. smile

3,111

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

thanks grah, i don't like my voice on recordings mainly because i tend to hold back, live is a different matter.

hi jeff, yes it is me on piano, i surprised myself as it's in Bb yikes

i play all instruments on my recordings including drums. thanks for the listen and comments.

phill

3,112

(16 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi grah. loved your words, made me smile, nice use of chords too. personally, i like your voice.

phill

3,113

(13 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I haven't done a Ballard in ages so when the idea for this came along I did it as such.

I would like to hear your thoughts and comments, click on the "my web" button to your left to give it a listen.

thanks

3,114

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

British weather is a little hit and miss, but when we get a good one we get a good `un. Case in point is last summer which was super-duper cool

PS, I listened to your song and was very impressed, very blues-y. I enjoyed it. Well done

3,115

(14 replies, posted in Songwriting)

nice one jeff, i'll have a listen later, but your words echo the way we're all feeling this side of the pond, some days are wet, some days are windy and some are cold, but usually they are all 3 at the same time. we had a nice sunny day today, with a cold wind, but that didn't deter my granddaughter one bit, she loves playing in the garden.

phill

3,116

(11 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

when my PA went kaput, i searched the web for a cheap but good replacement, now i get emails from all those on-line music shops with bargains and sales. funny how they always turn up when your not desperate for new gear?

3,117

(2 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Hi Brian, got to say it was a pleasure, more than that, it was an easy song to musicalise (I know there's no such word but I couldn't think of the right one, senile dementure and all that) and of course you mentioned the magic word....RAP, all you missed out was the C lol

Phill

3,118

(8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

1. the publisher makes the most
2. the artiste/writer gets a bit
3. the arranger gets some, but i think his cut comes from the show producers, who get their money from the sponsors who make their money from people buying their goods.

i think there is also a fee paid by the broadcaster to the writer, publisher etc. and if they use the original recording, to the record company, now that's what i call stretching a buck.

i read somewhere that paul mccartney makes around £25,000,000 a year in royalties. a dirty job, but someone has to do it, paul, i don't mind helping, just a couple of grand would do me!

3,119

(8 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

you've never heard of royalties? it's amazing how money will cool your anger.

3,120

(5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

saturday; i've had this virus (on me not the PC) since new year, so i only did 1 show this year so far, till saturday when the agent guilted me into playing, so much as i wanted to go to my local club and get lubricated, i headed down to milford haven, which is right on the irish sea. it wasn't just raining it was chucking it down, the wind was gale force, so i got soaked and froze with the cold. but being the trouper i am, i soldiered on, and by the end of the night i felt much better, till i had to face the storm again....roll on summer  cool

3,121

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

that's the first time i've heard that, kinda reminds me of "helter skelter" and mccartney sounds very much like lennon don't you think?

is that a cigar box guitar he's playing?

3,122

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

I have my own little Beatles story, I may have put it up before, if so sorry.

Any way, I was around 11 and due to spring tides and a flooded road, my father had to take the long way home, we had radio Luxembourg on in the car when this rock and roll track came on and made my hair stand on end, it was "My Bonnie" the only time it was played on the radio. Many years later after reading The Beatles biography, that somewhere in Liverpool one George Harrison was also listening, so to me that instance gave me a feeling of brotherhood with George, God rest and bless him.

The following year when the Beatles became "main stream" I became a fan again and I have all their records in vinyl, cassette and CD! I say "again" because I found a record in 1968 of recordings made while they played in Hamburg and "My Bonnie" was included on the disc.

PS, I've had to listen to "New" by Paul 3 times to get into it, but now I'm glad I took the time, it's brilliant though not as good as "Memory almost full"

3,123

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i also hate rap, which is probably why i felt compelled to put your words to music...it's country style 4:4 beat with a rock feel



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(the bye bye part is repeated as much as you like. verse 2 sounds like the chorus)

3,124

(17 replies, posted in Songwriting)

i hardly ever sit down to (force) out a song any more. i used to, and went through several years of trash. when i joined chordie i thought i needed to write songs that had meaning and or a story.

these days i only write when something is itching to get out; i was in the shower and an opening line came to me, so while i was washing my bits i was developing the words and tune (they usually come together) so after drying off, i scurry down to my studio and pop the words down and look for the chords. if i have something good then i need to record it right away as if i don't by the time i get back to it, it's gone, so i leave it in my slush pile, and when i have a tune but no words i'll go back and see if they fit, maybe years later!

other times i've been strumming away or tinkling on the piano, when a chord sequence or a riff or tune comes out, soon a few words will come along whether i'm trying to write a song or not. in all cases the first few lines dictate the theme/story of the song, and what may start out as a rock song may end up as a ballad!

3,125

(17 replies, posted in Songwriting)

hi ed, i've been longing for this thread since i joined chordie, only i didn't know it.

easybeat and i have had a little chat on this subject, people writing songs putting them up for show hoping to get some kind of critique and getting no response.

when i first joined there was a group of members from all round the world that would do just that. it was nice. one rule; don't get nasty or rubbish someones work. you cant expect a 14 year old to enjoy a love song written by a 62 year old, so don't reply. if you do like it, or can give a little advice or suggest something that's great.

as you can see, i wish more people would take part in critiquing the offerings put up here. when you write a song, you can be blinded by your own ego.

EB, i think your friend should have asked your permission first and maybe you could have added or changed the lines suggested. having said that, it is a great feeling when you hear someone else's version of your song.