Bass Viking wrote:Thanks Pete and Dino! It always interests me as to why sometimes when somebody posts something they get alot of feedback and at other times hardly any feedback at all. I am not just fishing for pats on the back. At pushing sixty years old, I am a big boy and if somebody doesn't like something, I wish they would say. When no feedback is given, am I too take it that others didn't like it? I truly am still just trying to learn these things and want someone, anyone who has any ideas to let me know so I can then know what corrections, improvements etc I need to work on. Thanks you two for taking the time to comment. It is appreciated.
I don't spend much time in this forum. What a cool forum! Anyway, in the vein of responding as you wish to be treated, and following the Golden Rule as that's how I'd like to be treated too, here are my thoughts (for what they're worth).
What I liked: 1. You sang on-key. Big, big deal. There are many recording artists right now who don't know what that means it seems. 2. Good work working the guitar and voice together. I very much appreciated that you made your own arrangement on the guitar, sang in your natural baritone/bass, and didn't try to imitate Lennon. I think you made the arrangement you put together for the guitar work very nicely with your voice.
Opportunities for improvement: 1. In recording, I think the guitar was a bit soft. If you can boost it a little, I think that would help. 2. While I liked your singing very well, I think you could use a little help with phrasing and breath control.
I hope those are constructive for you. I really enjoyed the song. f
As a side note - is there information on Sound Click? I think I'd like to be able to record some things and post them for constructive criticism.