great stuff both of you,really enjoyed the vid.
keep them coming,seems very little interest from anyone else on chordie
but dont let that get to you,it is a reflection of others not of you.
it if counts for anything im very interested in listening to new music.
more please!
476 2021-02-12 20:21:28
Re: A Little Faith (24 replies, posted in Songwriting)
477 2021-02-08 23:58:58
Topic: The Law Man (0 replies, posted in Songwriting)
The Law Man
from the stage to the grave
as the wheels go round
clock strikes six
at the end of town
lawman walking with
arms at his side
hat pushed forward
from the sun he hide
sun now setting in the west
reflects from the star on his chest
throwing light
in the gun mans eyes
take every advantage
that a lawman can
risk his life for this town
something only a lawman understands
one shot rings out
one man goes down!
478 2021-02-08 08:14:34
Re: Musical Clutter (7 replies, posted in Poems)
I`m with you on this Phill.Peatle has a way of making the everyday stuff interesting and entertaining.
Just look out the window you`re looking at a song.
480 2021-01-21 18:34:31
Re: Nothing Flash (4 replies, posted in Poems)
Phill Williams wrote:
I love it Pete. You come up with some quirky stuff that everyone can identify to. I hate the plastic Pam's my self, if it ain't natural it ain't real!
Here Here!
natural and real do it for me every time.
481 2021-01-21 18:30:38
Re: Washing day (4 replies, posted in Poems)
I can relate to that one,well written
482 2021-01-21 18:28:28
Re: Love and Space (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Phill Williams wrote:
Oh yea! Friends with benefits eh? An other relationship piece? I love the way you and Peatle can take everyday events and make them into enjoyable stories.
Well done Brian.
Yeah Phill,i don`t really like writing love type songs unless i can add a different perspective.
this was a conversation i had with the owner of a music shop,he said his girlfriend had got
a job elsewhere. they had played sport/ worked /played in a band/ lived together.
483 2021-01-20 23:56:39
Topic: Love and Space (2 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Love and Space
I always thought my happiness
depended on you
but i was wrong
cause since you`ve gone
the suns still shining through
we`re still friends and lovers
but we both got
our own space and time
never thought i could
be this happy
when i`m not with you all the time
so come on over lets talk
about our different days
lets raise a glass of wine
and laugh about our different ways.
we`re still friends and lovers
with our own space and time
484 2021-01-18 07:54:37
Re: Frances (4 replies, posted in Poems)
that is a sensational piece of writing 10/10
485 2021-01-15 02:58:59
Re: A Texas Limerick (2 replies, posted in Poems)
Lost my money to the state of taxes
i ignored all their phonecalls and faxes
i paid in the end
the money i send
two things that can`t be ignored
are death and taxes
486 2021-01-15 00:44:00
Re: Nashville Tuning (10 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Sounds great Zurf,would love to hear more of your posts.
487 2021-01-12 18:39:44
Re: Cold Virginia Snow (8 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Great piece of writing,this is a bit special.
488 2021-01-12 18:36:16
Re: Just A Girl From Texas (11 replies, posted in Songwriting)
great chorus tig,reckless/texas clever rhyme.
489 2021-01-09 22:30:52
Re: Chordie Member Has Won A Semi Final Place In A Worldwide Song Contest (15 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
thanks for your support guys,i`m not getting too carried away as these comp things are funny beasts.
but i do want to encourage the rest of you to put your music out in the world,you have nothing to lose.
why would you spend years building a boat and never put it in the water.!
i havent got a musical bone in my body, but somehow manage to muddle a song together.
490 2021-01-09 00:08:51
Re: Chordie Member Has Won A Semi Final Place In A Worldwide Song Contest (15 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Hey Peatle many thanks for that,it`s been a crazy world the last year and me making the semis
just goes to show how crazy.
Im sure the other semis are beautifilly sung,brilliantly played,and probably fantastic production.
mine is just a basic stripped back honest simple song.
491 2021-01-07 04:09:40
Re: Ha Ha Ha (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Dirty Ed wrote:
I agree with Phil that it sounds like you're having fun, but with the reverb I couldn't tell what you're singing about. Maybe my ears are just tuned to Appalachian foothill accents, sorry.
Ed
thanks for your comments,is the reverb too much?I`ve had this comment once before.But when i play it
back i dont hear much reverb at all.I do set a bit of reverb on my recorder but this is only to cover for
my not very good voice.I wonder if my kiwi accent has befumbled you also?
I`ll go listen to my stuff on another device,maybe that could be the problem ,me not hearing the reverb.
thanks again
B.
492 2021-01-06 23:52:22
Re: Ha Ha Ha (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Phill Williams wrote:
nice one Brian. you sound like you're having a lot of fun
Yeah Phill,theres a lot of serious stuff on chordie so thought i`d bang out a fun song.
493 2021-01-06 20:06:30
Topic: Ha Ha Ha (5 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Woke up with a croaky voice so i thought lets see what happens if i record something.
https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/ha-ha-ha
494 2020-12-30 08:16:54
Re: Poem: Wretched Lives - maybe a song somehow ? (6 replies, posted in Poems)
Tig
great to see you writing something different to your usual.
i think it has really paid off on this one.
look forward to you mixing it up more often.
Phill has done a cracking job with it.
495 2020-12-28 09:05:29
Re: Understanding Andy And Flo (9 replies, posted in Poems)
well written Andy whoops i mean Pete
496 2020-12-21 23:12:16
Re: Winter Solstice (5 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Zurf
enjoy the wine,making the best of a bad situation.
maybe 2 bottles and you`d doubly make the most.
3 bottles and you`d just make a bad situation.
merry christmas
497 2020-12-21 21:58:14
Re: CHRISTMAS BEAU (5 replies, posted in Poems)
great to see all the christmas songs on chordie
keep im coming !!!!!
498 2020-12-20 04:29:57
Re: Come On Back; It's Christmastime (9 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Lets hear it Phill !!!!!!
499 2020-12-19 20:55:19
Re: about 30" (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Zurf wrote:
easybeat wrote:here in NZ we`ve got 2 feet one on each leg!
Ha ha. I do love your word play.
Humour makes the world go round
And it stops you feeling down
So if a lift is what you need
humours better than smoking weed
500 2020-12-17 23:43:26
Re: about 30" (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
here in NZ we`ve got 2 feet one on each leg!