jerome.oneil wrote:

I also see (in the second post!)



The Punch Brothers - This is mandolin virtuoso Chris Thilie's band.  The guy is a phenomenal player.

Tim O'Brien - Another of my personal faves.  I've stalked him at festivals, in fact, and got to lightly accost him in an elevator.  smile  Great mandolin player and songwriter.  His album "Cornbread Nation" is one of my favorites, and the song "Father, Forgive Me" is what a spiritual should always be.  He also plays a lot with the above mentioned Darrel Scott.

To expand on Jerome's comments:

Chris Thilie's Punch Brothers were a huge part of the soundtrack for the recent movie "Inside Llewyn Davis", and Chris is also back together (most likely short lived) and touring with Nickel Creek this summer.  Nickel Creek's other members are Sean Watkins (acoustic guitar) & Sara Watkins (violin). Sean was also in the group Fiction Family with Switchfoot's Jon Foreman, and Sara put out a solo album a little while back that I thought sounded great, but I'm a contemporary folk genre fan.

652

(27 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Enjoyed it Amy. You always sing so great, but I think your guitar backing here was performed very clean, and beachy, AKA "come to my island!". I think your vocals are so much better on your originals than your covers; although, that may just be my personal preference to original work. Anyway, I put this one up there with Tequila and Jack, which is my favorite Amy songs.

653

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Thanks Ken and Dino. Yep, recording coming soon. Another reason why I wrote this was that I remember some advice that was mentioned on a TV show by an old folk singer/songwriter, I don't remember their name. He said that songwriters, when they start to run out of ideas in their own life, should look for inspiration the news of the world from stories that touched you. Well this tragic story surely touched me.

654

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Thanks Phill and Graham. I'm getting over a chest cold which is crimping my recording right now. I tried the other day to record my last song, Selfless Deeds, but couldn't make it through without coughing. As soon as I am breathing better I will get it done. Here is a link to the story by the way: http://abcnews.go.com/US/babies-found-d … d=23311067

655

(6 replies, posted in Songwriting)

I wrote this song after reading this tragic story out of Utah in the news recently. The bodies of 7 babies were found in the garage of the babies' mother, who had apparently killed 6 of them, after her first baby was stillborn. It just made me sad wondering just what the world had lost when these lives were taken away so near each of their births. Initially it was thought that she killed all of the children, but now as more details were discovered it is believed that the first child was stillborn, and that event might have started the whole tragic cycle. I was trying to focus on what the world will be without rather that the actions of the mother, but I sure wish this could have been prevented.

Only Just Begun By Jeff Gilpin


April 14, 2014




Intro strumming Am\\\\ \\G\




[Am]Anna would have grown up


To become a high school teacher.


[Am]Billy was filled with gospel fire;


He was born to be a preacher.


[F]James would just turn out to be


An ordinary guy,


While [Am]Sarah would write love songs


That would start the world to cry.


The [G]twins, Ian and Elaine


Would write children bed time stories.


And [E]Benjamin would study history and


Dream a[E7]bout the days of glory.




But a [F]mother in confusion


Decided she would get rid,


And she [Am]also kept that secret


In the place where secrets hid.


We will [F]never know exactly who they’d grow to become,


Their [G]seven little lives were over not long [E]after they’d begun.


And it’s so [F]hard to imagine


What was going on inside.


In the [Am]mind of their mother,


Or the pressure she was under,


Or what [F]drove her in the end


To end the lives of her babies


When their [G]lives had [E]only just be[Am]gun. \\\\ \\G\







[Am]The picture of her face


All full of sorrow. Full of haunted


[Am]Mother’s lasting memories


And what would be the cost of.


For those [F]lives so early finished


That will never be replenished


Like the [Am]eyes we’ll never see.


The unseen eyes of seven babies


With the [G]names we’ll have to guess at


And whose lives we must surmise were


Hidden [Am]in a Utah car garage


Among other forgotten refuse


Where the [G]bodies of the children were ended early on


Before the [E]babies could ever find out where in [E7]life they would belong




Because a [F]mother in confusion


Decided she would get rid,


And she [Am]also kept that secret


In the place where secrets hid.


We will [F]never know exactly who they’d grow to become,


Their [G]seven little lives were over not long [E]after they’d begun.


And it’s so [F]hard to imagine


What was going on inside.


In the [Am]mind of their mother,


Or the pressure she was under,


Or what [F]drove her in the end


To end the lives of her babies


When their [G]lives had [E]only just be[Am]gun. \\\\ \\\\ X2 fade



656

(4 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Wonderful Ken. You already know I love this song, but you perform it very well and the video supports the story in song nicely.

657

(11 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Enjoyed it Phill, especially the rhythm guitar work leading into the song as well as throughout. Pretty catchy tune there.

658

(9 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Another good one Ken.

659

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thank you DE. My plan is to get a scratch recorded and posted this weekend.

660

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Dave.

661

(7 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Dino and Ken. I'll get a recording up soon.

662

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I wrote this awhile back when I was thinking about my son, who's now a US Army drill sergeant. He was relocated to Oklahoma late last fall and he has been putting in some long days and nights breaking in new recruits ever since. Meanwhile the benefits for those in the US military continues to get whittled down to practically nothing due to the ongoing political squabble not far from where I live. It is frustrating to me and I'm sure to quite a few others, but the fine men and women in the US military continue to do an outstanding job. So this one goes out to them.

Selfless Deed By Jeff Gilpin


January 15, 2014




Capo 3




They [C]come to our [F]towns from all [C]over


[F]As their uncle sugar dic[C]tates,


[G]Not sure what [F]kind of [C]welcome they’ll get,


Not [Am]sure of their [G]luck or their [C]fate. [G]




They’ve [C]joined up for [F]various [C]reasons


[F]As they take that next step in their [C]lives.


[G]They may grow [F]up or grow [C]sideways,


[Am]Either will [G]be a sur[C]prise. [C7]


So [F]here’s to the men and to the [C]women


Who [Am]take the oath, swear or af[G]firm.


[F]May the years of their service re[C]ward them


As they [Am]keep we, the [G]people from [C]harm.


[C]Some may [F]find that the [C]life is too hard,


[F]But some will embrace their hard [C]life,


And [G]go on to [F]do what’s [C]called of them, and


Get [Am]sharpened like the [G]edge of a [C]knife [G]



[C]Some of them may [F]get into [C]trouble


As they [F]grow to what they come to [C]be,


But [G]life is a [F]series of [C]lessons they’ll learn


As they [Am]serve in the [G]land of the [C]free.[C7]


So [F]here’s to the men and to the [C]women


Who [Am]take the oath, swear or af[G]firm.


[F]May the years of their service re[C]ward them


As they [Am]keep we, the [G]people from [C]harm.


[C]These brave [F]men and brave [C]women may


[F]End up as our neighbors some [C]day


Let’s[G]make the time to ap[F]preciate they’re [C]service


[Am]Protecting us [G]all from harm’s [C]way [G]


[C]There may [F]come a [C]day


[F]When these brave souls are in [C]need


[G]I hope and [F]pray that all the [C]rest of us can


Re[Am]pay them for [G]their selfless [C]deed [C7]


So [F]here’s to the men and to the [C]women


Who [Am]take the oath, swear or af[G]firm.


[F]May the years of their service re[C]ward them


As they [Am]keep we, the [G]people from [C]harm.



Enjoyed it Ken. Pure quality as always my friend.

664

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Dino...I agree, but I just wanted to get something out so people could sync the words with the chords properly. I think lots of my songs sound better when played slower.

665

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Ken - Great seeing you back here too.

666

(1 replies, posted in Song requests)

Here is a link to slow boat to China - http://www.theguitarguy.com/slowboat.htm
...and here is Far Away Places - http://www.guitaretab.com/b/bing-crosby/270095.html

667

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Thanks Artie. Yep, and I am in a similar "married up" situation.

668

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Absolutely....You could have them on either side like Elvis muttonchops. With those on your face it would be like having free advertizing too! People would know you were a musician and hire you on the spot!

669

(9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)

Great idea Roger. Maybe try it as a face tattoo... kind of like Mike Tyson did. big_smile

670

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Another good thing about the chordie.com forums is that the forums allow many people from all over the world to get together and share their ideas about music. While all these diverse people might not agree with everyone's ideas, their different ideas will often provoke thought that improves the overall group's musical knowledge, I know it has improved mine. There is nothing wrong with agreeing to disagree which I believe is going on a little in this thread. So enjoy the debate, keep is civil, and may everyone's guitar(s) stay forever in tune. Now I'm going to have another sip of coffee before I get back to picking and grinning. Happy Saturday y'all! smile

671

(8 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Here is a song I wrote a while back, but didn't post back then. For some reason I had this music on my mind this morning so I decided to share. I like it because it is short, uncomplicated, easy to relate to, and has a bit of variety in the music, and the way the lyrics are laid out. Here is a link to the scratch recording (https://soundcloud.com/jets60/youve-captured-my-heart) and the lyrics & chords are below. Feel free to give it a ride if you like.

You’ve Captured My Heart by Jeff Gilpin



August 6, 2013




Intro – finger picking in D




I haven’t a [G]clue what you see


When [G]you look at me


In fact my dear I really couldn’t care [D]less


Because when [D7]I look into your eyes


It’s [D7]always a big surprise


My guilty pleasure I must con[G]fess


I know [G7]others see it too


By the [G7]way they look at you


And the [C]appreciative looks I see their [Cm]eyes


[G]Now don’t get me wrong


Thought my [D]feelings are strong


My [Em]jealousy was finished from the [C]start


Because my [C]dear


It’s quite [D]clear


You’ve captured my [G]heart [D]





Bridge

[E]Now just let me say on those times you are away


[A]Thinking of you takes me to the moon


And our [D]endless days of living happily ever after


[G]Makes me hope and pray you’ll come back [D]home real soon


guitar solo chords [E] [A] [D] [G] [D] [D7]


I [G]can’t wait to see you more


But when you [D]knock on my door


Remember I’ve [Em]counted the days we’ve been a[C]part


Because my [C]dear


It’s crystal [D]clear


You’ve captured my [Em]heart


Yes my [C]dear


It’s really [D]clear


You know you’ve captured my [G]heart


672

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Also @Phill - It kind of relates as the backing tracks (and the explanation about how they were made) may be used by other songwriters for recording their song(s), so long as they use the same chords as the backing track. Besides, I couldn't figure which other forum to move it to.

673

(18 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Russell_Harding wrote:

I don't know nothing played when I clicked on the songs

Could be a problem with soundcloud. I have them from time to time when I'm there, but this time it played for me. I recommend you reload it or maybe clean out your cache and try and reload.

674

(10 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Good one Artie. Plays well and is reminiscent of other great cowboy songs. Adding this to my "Covers" folder.

Only one I found and it would be a loose interpretation since the original is a piano song. Anyway here is the link from Ult Guitars & and the video of the song if someone whats to work it out for you: http://tabs.ultimate-guitar.com/e/elton … ot_crd.htm
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fi0xN499 … feature=kp