51 Reply by Jody Wayne

(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

Well Kenny, your point of view just happened to be right this time.
"Sad country songs always make me cry" is a lot better now too.
I did the same thing there I did here.  Who said you can't teach
an old guy a new trick?  smile
Thanks again,
jody

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52 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Kenny is right!  I just played it.  Much better.
Thanks Kenny,
jodyWayne

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53 Reply by Jody Wayne

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I did a little rewrite.  It flows better now.  Thanks for the suggestion.

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54 Topic by Jody Wayne

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Would You Dance With Me Tonight V2By Wayne Fiala


                         


(Spoken)> [G]Evenin Mamm.


[C]I see you're here alone.


[G]I just love the way you fix your hair.


(Sing)> [D]And, your make-up is just right.


(Spoken)> [C]Do you believe in love at first sight?


[G]Did you say no?


(Sing)> [D]Well, neither did I, until to[G]night.


If [C]I ask the question,


would you dance with me to[G]night?


[D]Would you dance with me to[G]night?


And, [C]if this is love at first [G]sight,


[D]you'll say yes,and it'll feel [G]right.


So, if [C]I ask the question,


would you dance with me to[G]night?


[D]Would you dance with me to[G]night?




[G]You Take my arm.


[C]I'll escort you to the dance [G]floor.




When the band plays,


and they turn [C]down the house [G]lights,


you can [D]put your arms around me,


and I'll hold you just [G]right.


When the vio[C]len and guitar, sing their love [G]song,


my [D]lips will touch your ear, as I softly sing a[G]long.


And I'll whis[C]per the words in your [G]ear,


that a [D]woman in love wants to [G]hear.


And, [C]as the music notes fill the [G]air,



we'll pre[D]tend we're alone,


and no one else is [G]here.


So if [C]I ask the question,


would you dance with me to[G]night?


[D]Would you dance with me [G]tonight?




[G]We'll shuffle our feet,


[C]make slow circles around the dance [G]floor.


[D]When the music stops,


we'll be close to the [G]door.


And, [C]I'll ask the question,


would you come home with me to[G]night?


And, [C]if this is love at first [G]sight,


[D]you'll say yes, and it'll feel [G]right.




And, [C]when we get there,


and the music notes fill the [G]air,


[D]we'll be alone, no one else will be [G]there.


You can [C]put your arms around me,


and I'll hold you just [G]right.


We'll [D]dance slow-N-close,late into the [G]night.


And I'll whis[C]per the words in your [G]ear,


that a [D]woman in love wants to [G]hear.


And, [C]I'm not a love-em and leave-em kinda [G]guy!


I don't de[C]cieve-em, love-em, then leave-em to [G]cry!


Oh, I'm a [D]one woman, devoted man kinda [G]guy.


So, if [C]I ask the questin, would you dance with me to[G]night?


[D]Would you dance with me, for the rest of your [G]life?


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55 Reply by Jody Wayne

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KAP54 wrote:

Now that's a lot gooder Jody big_smile
Yup sad country songs will pull on your heart strings till the cows come home.
Nice Write
Kenny

Thanks Kenny!

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56 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Good one.  They say love makes the world go round?

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57 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Well, this song is a prime example of something I would write.  There are so many troubled souls.  And, too many tragic endings.
I have seen my fair share!  But, that is the reality of life.  Very well written.  Great song.  I agree with (selso), I love it too!
jodyWayne

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58 Topic by Jody Wayne

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THANK YOU FOR LOOKING AT MY SONGS

((I Am Working On A Rewrite, I'll Repost Soon))



Chordpro error: The song does not contain chords. Please include at least two chords in brackets within the text, like this: [C7].

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59 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Old Doll wrote:

I like this Jody,

I do believe true love in our hearts is our  path to victory.
I would love to hear this piece at church. It would feel right i believe in that setting.

Hope your  keeping well sir.

Old Doll.

Hello Old Doll,
I'm glad you like it.
I hope you are well also.
It's nice to hear from you.
I'll keep you posted on a video.
Thank you very much,
jodyWayne

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60 Reply by Jody Wayne

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KAP54 wrote:

Interesting Jody, I would like to hear your take on how this is played and vocalized.
Well Done, lots of food for thought.

Kenny

Hi Kenny,
I haven't actually created a musical melody for this one.
I speek it while softly playing a G-C-D chord progression.
I guess I've kinda left it open for each person to perform it however he or she feels compeled.
Some time in the near future I will do a video and put it on YouTube.  I'll let you know when it's done.
Now, the band at the church my daughter attends has offered to create some music for it.  I will definately
get some video of them performing the song if or when they do.  "The song of victory" is inspirational.  Play
with it, let your inner feelings guide you, and enjoy it.  It's nice to hear from you.
Thank you very much,
jodyWayne

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61 Topic by Jody Wayne

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Chordpro error: The song does not contain chords. Please include at least two chords in brackets within the text, like this: [C7].

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62 Reply by Jody Wayne

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KAP54 wrote:

Hi Jody,
Good story line and choice for your title.
Keep up the good work. big_smile

PS
I hope your getting over your voice problems.

Kenny

Hi Kenny,
Thanks for your input.  and concern.
I hope all is well with you.
Take care, jodyWayne

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63 Reply by Jody Wayne

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jasonhague321 wrote:

I love this poem, I hate those 3 words

J

Hi Jason,
Thank you sir.
lol, jodyWayne

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64 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Old Doll wrote:

Excellent Jody Wayne,

You nailed it sir.

Old Doll.

Thanks Old Doll.  You take care.
jodyWayne

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65 Reply by Jody Wayne

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tubatooter1940 wrote:

I love it when my sweet wife meets me at the door on pay day with those three little words, "Where's the money?"

I could write a song about that!  Good one tubatooter.  lol
jodyWayne

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66 Topic by Jody Wayne

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Those Three Little Wordsby Wayne Fiala


Inspired by Chordie Forum members






[1]His eyes are open, yet he does not see,


the love I have for him, deep inside of me.






[2]His heart beats I know, I hear it, when my ear,


is upon his chest, I wonder though,




what he hears, when his ear,




is at my brest.






[3]I feel his love, as our child grows,


within my womb. He says nothing,




so how he feels, I can only assume.






[4]I've mentioned flowers,



but I've gotten none.




His new golf clubs are really nice,




I'll bet he's having lots of fun.






[5]I never hear "those three little words",


and I don't know why?  I ask often enough,




I get no answer.  What else can I do, but cry.






[6]I fix my hair and wear his favorite dress.


But he's not here.  He's too busy,




telling someone else,




"I love you".




I guess?



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67 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Daddycool and Helena, look at the post on the Poem Forum titled:  "Those Three Little Words"

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68 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Well, here's another one my brain never thought to write about.

Well done daddycool.

Keep up the good work!

jodyWayne

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69 Reply by Jody Wayne

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This is the one thing my brain never thought of to write a song about.
Supprising how much of this really is true, if ya think about it.
Hmmm...  roll  Mabe he wasn't pulling your leg?  smile

Keep writing em,  jodyWayne

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70 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Nice song Daddycool,
My mother is 80 years old now.  Not knowing the melody, I did my best singing your song to her and she loved it.
Thanks with a happy tear from my mom.
jodyWayne

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71 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Hey Stran,
These are great songs.  I like "Nobody" as a poem too.
I got started writing songs by converting my short stories to songs.
I am starting to convert some of my songs to poems and some of my poems to songs now.
You seem to be very good at it.  So, I'm gonna keep an eye on you.  cool

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72 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Jewels8080 wrote:

Great Lyrics/Story Jody, Well done. :-)

Hello Jewels,  Thank you very much.  I'm glad you like it.
                    I would love to see a Hollywood style video of this.
                    I think it would be really cool... well, hot I guess?  lol

                    Take care, jodyWayne

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73 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Old Doll wrote:

Hi Jody,

Yes!  I believe  for as along as we have a hunger for power and greed we will have war.

Good Piece sir, well written.

Old Doll.

You are right about that.
Thanks old doll.
jodyWayne

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74 Reply by Jody Wayne

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T-Rex wrote:

deep stuff, I think may appeal to all; thoughts we've all had watching our countrymen and women fight and die for our freedom.  Nicely written.  -T

Thanks T-Rex.
Take care, jodyWayne

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75 Reply by Jody Wayne

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Old Doll wrote:

Good idea Jody,

I have been to listen to your youtube new songs.. I just didnt have the time to comment then.

Im sorry to hear your voice so strained, it maybe best to rest it awhile i feel.. Speak softly, drink plenty of water,
gargle with honey, lemon, and port.. It works..

Good health to you and keep writing sir..

Old Doll.

Hi Old Doll,
How are you girl?  I found out that I am probably having an allergic reaction to something?
Now all we have to do is find out what.  There may be hope yet.
If I can get this fixed, I will delete all those youtube songs and re-record them.
Then you will hear what my real voice sounds like.
And, I will finish the work I started on your song, "Will you dance with me".  I love that song, it's beautifull.
Thank you for listening to my songs on YouTube.  I hope you liked them.

You take care now.  It is always good to hear from you.  jodyWayne

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