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I haven't heard of this song before neo, first time I am hearing it.   With that said, it suited your vocals well and you played it well too.     

Hmmm not much in the way of suggestions on here this time around, bit disappointing but BIG THANKS to Grah1 for your original song which I will post in December`s FSTOM for people to cover if they want.  Thanks neo also for your cover you posted which I will also pop into Decembers FSOTM.     

lol good on the cat Now that is a song I haven't heard in a very long time.  I have to say the guitar playing on this was great neophytte.  Is that a different guitar?     

Peatle, that's a good poem right there.  I like how you have put that one together.  I read through it a couple of times and it has some really good points in it.     

I am so sorry to hear the news about Dondra, Bills beloved wife and partner.  I have fond memories of how Bill always said lovely things about his Dondra.  My thoughts go out to Bill.  I miss seeing Strummer Boy Bill on here, he always had great things to say, he was a great conversationalist on here and genuinely enjoyed chatting with all that came on here.  I received a few emails and Christmas cards from Bill over the time I knew him on here and always enjoyed hearing from him.   Much love and thoughts to you Bill and your family xx     

easybeat, well done on your original song.  Maybe a little repetitive on the line 'The Rain" on this one when I listened to it but just my opinion.  Guitar work awesome as always.

neophytte, nicely performed on this cover.  Interesting the effect to your vocals on this one, what program were you using on the vocals?

Phill, I didn't get any report and can`t see anything about it in the moderator's section either.  Was it an email?  And agree, I can`t see anything here that needs reporting on.

SEPTEMBER 2024 – NAME, TOWN, AGE, ELEMENTS

Original thread can be found here:  https://www.chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?id=39627
If you missed out, it's never too late!  You can share a link at the thread above, comment there, etc.!
Here are quick links to member's submissions (if I missed any, please post in the original thread linked above and I'll get this post updated!)

Grah1:   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YbjhD-649fk
easybeat:   https://soundcloud.com/rough-as-gut/old-fashion-letter
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2XFbW0_fZvY
neophytte:  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iL9GFAn2iu4     

Peatle, good to hear that this guy and the people he works with, are still doing their art and trade mostly by their human hand and brain.     

Peatle, clever piece of writing there and a good message in it, well done

easybeat, thanks for the feedback, I had fun trying to write this and thankfully it just flowed      

OK I couldn't write a song that worked for the word CUSTODY, so I ended up writing a poem (or something) that has deliberately lots of rhyming (because I know how much some of you love poems that rhyme NOT) lol.  Anyway, as I started writing this poem, it kind of took a twist ......

CUSTODY  written by Jandle (Jan)

Minding my own business, running his company
When suddenly the phone rang, there`s been a tragedy
With shock and tears, I listened reluctantly
To the awful news of how, he had died suddenly
It wasn`t an accident, so I was informed
He had been killed, cruelly and cold-bloodedly

No weapon had been found at the scene unfortunately
But from the looks of the crime scene, a knife had been used quite meticulously
Investigations were ongoing, they were looking for somebody
I hung up the phone and sat there uncomfortably
Thoughts and emotions flowing abundantly

You see, he was the owner of this large drug company
Sadly, he had no remedy for his own murder, unluckily
He had told us he was planning to use new technology
Many of us would be faced with redundancy
Cops interviewed all those that worked at the company
Asking questions, looking at them mistrustfully

And after years of investigation and no suspect to be found
The case finally closed; no criminal had been bound
In the years that followed and in the reading of his Will
A letter had been left for me, from him by all accounts
I opened the envelope, carefully, slicing it with my knife
Turns out he had left CUSTODY of the drug company to me