Wow Beautiful guitar !
2,177 2017-09-30 01:16:12
Re: Seems Your Heart's Gone Cold (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I have been re- writing this thing over and over - trying to find the right chords and the right fit with the lyrics. I have modified both.
Phill did an excellent version of the original version.... however - it was bothering me that something wasn't quite right. as it turned out - i found that I needed lryic changes that were necessary - which then led me to replay this thing a hundred times or more - until I finally was happy with the chords.
That led me to re-thinking the title of the song - Which I changed to just " STONE COLD ".
I think I finally got there - at least it sounds right in my head. I have been finger picking the heck out of this on my Martin ( and occasionally on my Fender 12 string) both sounded great to me.
anyway - here is the new version
STONE COLD
[C]I think you and I both know
That our[Em] love is passing by
[Am]been trying to think of reasons,
and I'm [F] trying not to [G]cry
[C]seems long ago, you and I
Thought our [Em]lives had turned to gold
[F]now all we have are stormy nights
where your [G]heart has turned stone [C]cold
Chorus
[F] you once said that you'd love me for[C] ever
[F] now I'm finding out , that isn't [C]true
[F] I know I can't make you [C]love me
But I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
no I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
.
[C] now I wake up every morning
and I [Em] feel the emptiness inside
[Am] the silence makes me feel like
a [F] part of me has [G]died
[C]started looking at old photographs
[Em] got me wishing for days of old
[F] but love can't be saved by sweet memories
Cause your [G]heart has turned stone [C]cold
.
Chorus
.
[F] you once said that you'd love me for[C] ever
[F] now I'm finding out , that isn't [C]true
[F] I know I can't make you [C]love me
But I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
no I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
[C] Now I've got long, sleepless nights
Cause I [Em] can't get you off my mind
[Am] never thought it'd come to this
It's so [F] hard to leave love be[G]hind
[C] my friends all tell me to move along
but i [Em] won't listen to what I'm told
[F'] I know what your love was like
before your [G] heart turned stone[C] cold
.
Chorus
.
[F] you once said that you'd love me for[C] ever
[F] now I'm finding out , that isn't [C]true
[F] I know I can't make you [C]love me
But I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
no I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
I [G] can’t make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
This is a link to the same- but it is my songbook in chopro from which for me is a lot easier to see , read, and play - not to mention - scrolling ability
http://www.chordie.com/chord.pere/?url= … ranspose=0
Thanks for giving it a second look and thanks to Phill for a wonderful first version.
Jim
2,178 2017-09-29 20:33:04
Re: The one song (15 replies, posted in Songwriting)
the answer my friend is blowing in the wind...........
i agree with the others ... my greatest hits cd that I made this morning, would be different by the end of the day
good thought, though virtually impossible to nail down.
2,179 2017-09-29 18:47:01
Re: Introduction (26 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Richard
Glad you have joined us - looking forward to some great stuff !
Jim
2,180 2017-09-25 22:52:50
Re: Happy Anniversary, Badeye! (4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
what he said - I always look forward to a great Blues lesson every friday !! Keep em coming Badeye !!
JIM
2,181 2017-09-24 10:35:46
Re: SUGGESTIONS: OCTOBER 2017 FEATURED SONG OF THE MONTH (17 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Steve Earle - You're still standing there
2,182 2017-09-24 10:34:38
Re: Be Careful Who You Choose (8 replies, posted in Poems)
That's really,really good Peatle !!!!!
2,183 2017-09-21 16:07:58
Re: Andres Segovia place in guitar history. (4 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Peatle
good info -
I love learning stuff like that as well
Thanks for sharing
Jim
2,184 2017-09-21 16:06:30
Re: Dad brag moment! (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Beamer
Nice picture.
He sure is looking happy - best of luck throuhout the remaining season
Jim
2,185 2017-09-21 11:01:41
Re: This Post is About SPAM (24 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
now, now, boys and girls -
When I was in college and had no money I used to have Spam and Macaroni & Cheese for dinner 3 or four times a week - I didn't mind it at all.
I actually kinda liked it. But then again I grew up with 9 siblings - my dad was killed in an industrial accident when I was 7 months old - leaving my mom with 10 kids and a farm to run. When you came to dinner you ate what was served - no complaining or you ended up with nothing. I guess that's why SPAM ain't so bad to me.
As far as ingredients - no worse than chicken McNuggets or hot dogs. While I admit that I haven't had any in probably 10 - 15 years - I wouldn't hesitate if it was on my plate.
"When you are facing hunger with limited means - pretty much everything looks good"
I love the Monty Python skit ! ![]()
2,186 2017-09-20 10:36:10
Topic: Seems Your Heart's Gone Cold - on Soundcloud (4 replies, posted in My local band and me)
Phill did a recording of my song " Seems Your Heart's Gone Cold" and I put it up on Soundcloud.
https://soundcloud.com/tigljk/hearts-gone-cold
I can't express how much I appreciate what Phill does to my songs in words and do it justice.... so I will just say simply -
Thank you Phill.!!
Hope you give it a listen.
Jim
2,187 2017-09-19 15:33:13
Re: Tuesday's Flying Fingers (474 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
very unique - way too much going on for me though - I like the guitar tapping. Do you have to have a mic / pic up in the guitar just for that or does the sound go through the electric system of the guitar ( like a regular acoustic electric set up ) ?
2,188 2017-09-19 00:06:38
Topic: girls from South Wales (1 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
I accidentally came across this - they are pretty darn good.
They dedicated the song to a Mr. Williams - but he didn't look like Phill.
Ever heard of these young ladies Phill ?
2,189 2017-09-15 11:11:42
Re: friday's blues fix (1,560 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
good one badeye
2,190 2017-09-13 10:20:06
Re: SEPTEMBER 2017 FSOTM -ANOTHER CHALLENGE MONTH! (41 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Mojo
really good man !
Townes is one of my faves, you did it justice and a lot more !
The Texas sound is surely only for Texans - and you got it.
Thanks for sharing
Jim
2,191 2017-09-12 23:36:41
Re: Bill & Dondra Went Moving (3 replies, posted in Poems)
lol - that's very good
Hope Bill and Dondra smile!
2,192 2017-09-11 16:11:21
Re: Seems Your Heart's Gone Cold (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Thank you Tyson
I'm really not a songwriter - just a guy that likes to wear emotions on the sleeve. That's the great part that I cherish so much about Chordie - so many people that have a multitude of perspectives - it allows for honest and real feedback.
I am so honored when someone likes one of my attempts at a song. I am surely just a novice, and I have learned first hand about the dire warning you give in your last line:
"There is one down side to writing good songs : the next one always has to be better." It doesn't always happen that way for sure. ![]()
Thanks for your comments.
Jim
ps HOW 'bout them PACKERS !!!
2,193 2017-09-09 17:56:11
Re: Seems Your Heart's Gone Cold (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
Phill
you know I don't mind
Dont get hurt doing it ! LOL
2,194 2017-09-09 14:21:38
Topic: Seems Your Heart's Gone Cold (7 replies, posted in Songwriting)
I had this song in my head early this morning - I have no Idea why. It has nothing to do with my life.... I was just empathizing I think
Anyway here it is...
Seems your hearts gone cold
[C]I think you and I both [Am]know
That our[F] love is passing [C] by
[C]I been trying to think of[Am] reasons,
and I'm [F] trying not to [G]cry
[C]Seems so long ago that [Am]you and I
Thought our [F]lives had turned to [C]gold
[C] now there' s too many [Am] stormy nights
where it [F]seems your [G]hearts gone [C]cold
[C]when I wake up now each [Am]morning
and I [F] feel the emptiness in [C]side
[C] I can' t help but think [Am]to myself
That a [F] a part of me has [G]died
[C]I'm sitting here looking at [Am]photographs
Got me [F]wishing for those days of [C]old
[C] but this can't be fixed by [Am]memories
because it [F]seems your [G]hearts gone [C]cold
Chorus
[F] you once said that you'd love me[C]forever
now I'm [F] finding out , that really isn't [C]true
and I [F] know that I can't make you [C]love me
But I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
[C]Now I've got sleepless nights and [Am]restless days
cause you're [F] still always on my [C]mind
[C]I never thought it would [Am]come to this
hard to [F] leave what we had [G]behind
[C] Now my friends tell me to [Am]move along
Don't [F] dwell on a love that's grown [C] old
[C] But they don't know you like [Am] I did
before your [F] loving [G] heart went [C] cold
Chorus
[F] you once said that you'd love me[C]forever
now I'm [F] finding out , that really isn't [C]true
and I [F] know that I can't make you [C]love me
But I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
I [G] can't make myself [F]stop loving [C]you
2,195 2017-09-09 10:58:30
Re: Don Williams.... RIP. (3 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
sad indeed - add Troy Gentry to the list as he died yesterday in a helicopter crash in NJ.
Tragic
2,196 2017-09-09 10:56:27
Re: Day Four Of Bill & Dondra's Move (9 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
Could this be the origin of the term - " Drum Roll please ?" ![]()
Methinks the hospitals should be donating a percentage to the chordie website since it seems we all have become such good patrons.
Bill the story was fab - lots of smiles in that one.
Sorry about the fall - hope for a speedy recovery
AT least it happened before this damned Irma hits your area an inundates you with H2O
and I agree with Phill - I need to speak with the emergency services at my ER - I didn't get any lollipop !
( I'm figuring the treated you special b/c you had Dondra with you !)
JIm
2,197 2017-09-07 16:16:34
Re: SUGGESTIONS: OCTOBER 2017 FEATURED SONG OF THE MONTH (17 replies, posted in Featured Song of the Month)
Might have to include Florida and east coast states in a few days
2,198 2017-09-06 10:52:24
Re: What Inspired your Chordie Nickname? (34 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
TIGLJK
When I was in college, I always jokingly answered the phone in my dorm room by saying " The Incredibly Good Looking Jim Kenyon, how can I help ya ?" A couple of my friends that were girls made me a shirt for Christmas with TIGL-JK on it as a gift. When I post stuff on the net, including Chordie, I use the acronym mainly because I do not want my students to find it - so hence I often use the alias. ![]()
Jim
2,199 2017-09-05 22:52:07
Re: Funny Tab Video (7 replies, posted in Chordie's Chat Corner)
that's funny!!!
2,200 2017-09-04 12:14:58
Re: Excellent Cover Bands (42 replies, posted in Bands and artists)
TF
WOW !!!!!!!!
Well thank you for removing about an hour and a half from my Monday morning !
I could not stop watching these amazing performances.
You are absolutely correct - pick any one and it is fantastic!
The song they did by Toto - Africa - by far my favorite however. The simulated thunderstorm was incredible. I kept saying to my self as I listened with headphones - there has got to be some musical instruments or digital enhancement - but alas - there is none !!!!
I really love great musical talent - the orchestration of all those singers must've been ridiculous.
Thank you so much for sharing that - I am sure I will re-visit when I need a little inspiration or just need to go to a happy place for a while!
JIm