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(5 replies, posted in Songwriting)

This feels like a very personal and sincere piece, and you can really sense the emotion behind it. Turning a moment of frustration or heartbreak into a song is never easy, but rewriting and refining it clearly helped shape what you originally had in mind. The quotes you included fit the theme well and add depth to the message about life, effort, and using your talents. Sharing work like this is what makes creative communities valuable, and it’s the kind of heartfelt storytelling that listeners who enjoy music and films on platforms like fmovieswatch.net can genuinely appreciate.     

I’m trying to track down a rock song and its singer, but unfortunately my memory is very limited. It’s an older rock track, and the only part of the lyrics I vaguely remember sounds like “I can tell your trouble and… obsessed.” I know that’s not much to go on, but I’m hoping someone here might recognize it or have a suggestion. Any help from fellow music fans would be greatly appreciated.     

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(6 replies, posted in Poems)

This is a beautifully written and atmospheric piece. The way you capture the restlessness of the night, mixed with sharp observations of nature, really pulls the reader into that half-awake, half-dreaming state. I especially like how the imagery shifts from inner thoughts to the outside world—the owl, the stars, the early signs of spring—which mirrors the wandering mind so well. There’s a gentle honesty here about age, sleep, and those early hours when everything feels both peaceful and heavy at the same time. A very relatable and evocative read.