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i know im not gonna win a spelling b, but still tell me what u think of this one.

(verse 1)

i was watchen the tube

and i was thinking of you

and as i fade off to sleep

you still run thru my mind

(pre chorus)

now im sleepin and im dreamin

and im dreaming of you

(chorus)

and we're walkin and were singing

and we're singing and we're singing a song

it was a song that i had writen for u

and as were singin i was thinken

ill never be with you

(verse 2)

three a.m and i wake up

and i look at the spot were you used to lay

but the sheets are so cold

cold like a sunday in mid december

now im pourin a drink

and i start to think

but as im thinking i drift away

and then i start dreamin

and im dreamin of you

(chorus)

(verse 3)

now its moring my heads punding

probly from the consuption

from the night before

and now im starrin really wondering

why the sheets are still cold

then i remember that i was only dreamin

and the only time that im with you

is in my sleep

so i poor another and another till ive had enuf

then its back to sleepin for you and

then i start dreamin

and im dreamin of you

(chorus) 2x

me and esd are struggaling trying to find shows or little gigs. the most we could find was the tallent show. and that only got us a wopping 125 bucks so any info will help

PLEASE REPLY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

im new to song writing but i was wondering what people thought of this piece if i should finish it or not

sorry theres no chourse.

(verse one)

GG Em

mrs heartake is nowere around /GG Em

once again she's probly sleepen around /GG Em

day in and day out i deal with this shit /GG Em

i guess truly i am kinda wiped /GG Em

i cant help it shes one fine bitch /GG Em

(chorse)

(Verse 2)

when im at work all she does is play

shes out all night then she sleeps all day

when were at school ya know she's skippen out

pisses me off makes me wanna shout

but i cant help it shes one fine bitch

(chorse)

(verse 3)

dont ya know its really easy to see

she's in love but its not with me

i should end it but really i can't

i  cant help it shes one fine bitch

(chorse)

all verses would have the same chords,im still working out the guitar part so it will probly change. tell me what you think