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Topic: Good Time Offenders - 'nother 'n progress...

They'll Walk In Defendin'
     What They've Never Done
          What They'll Never Do

They'll Walk Out Offended
     Unless Their Defenses
          Go Senseless And Lose
     All Sense Of Decorum -
          Findin' Someone To Moan Out Their Blues

Good Time Offenders
     Ridin' Fences On Benders
          Defend Against Love For The Score
     Ride The Bar Rails To Bed Rails
     Chasin' Your Strange Tail
          Saddle Sore Broke Wantin' More...

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2 Reply by unhhuh (edited by unhhuh 2009-02-22 15:47:27)

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Re: Good Time Offenders - 'nother 'n progress...

They'll Walk In Defendin'
     What They've Never Done
          What They'll Never Do

They'll Walk Out Offended
     Unless Their Defenses
          Go Senseless And Lose
     All Sense Of Decorum -
          And Find Someone To Help'em Moan Out Their Blues

Good Time Offenders
     Ridin' Fences On Benders
          Defend Against Love For The Score
     Ride The Bar Rails To Bed Rails
     Chasin' Their Strange Tail
          Saddle Sore Broke Wantin' More...

They Walked In Defendin'
     What They'd Never Done
          What They'd Never Do

They're Leavin' Contented
     They Finally Repented
          Of Defendin' Their Due -

They Said They Wouldn' Be Offended
     By Some Baby Blues Bendin'
          Rides On The Rails Just For Grins

A Romantic Partner
     Not Bound For The Altar
          A Good Time Offenders Best Friend

**second version revised

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Re: Good Time Offenders - 'nother 'n progress...

this must be so deep cos i'm really confused, i took it to be a comment on the american legal system at first, then it turned into a bed room encounter...

well done, but i guess there's more to come?

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Re: Good Time Offenders - 'nother 'n progress...

...more to come posted as Good Time Defenders in the Songwriting Section - http://chordie.com/forum/viewtopic.php?pid=64728#p64728

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