1 (edited by marcalan 2010-03-06 15:34:13)

Topic: In My House

I was wondering if any of you grew up in a haunted house like I did. I wrote this about the spirit in my house. She had hung herself in the attic where I slept. I didnt find out till later; probably why Dad got the house so cheap.

In my House                                                     m. mcvicker  3/10





The girl who loved me, who lived in my house;
the hairs on my neck would stand.
She said, “Let me hold you,
then you will know, and I’ll show you; I was the one who
was with you and scared you so.
“Just let me hug you; then you’ll understand.

“You wouldn’t stop to hear me. I cried out to you at times.
I know you heard my tear drops, forever friend of mine
“I saw  you cast your eyes, to the curtain, behind which I stayed.
I know you knew I was there and wished that we had played.
But I tell you we did! I chased you up the basement stairs and made you feel alive;
as you passed the attic door it was me that moved your stride.

I was there in your dreams as well,
haunting, and trying to be near.
I sat on your bed one night and filled you full of fear.

You left me, in that house; it was I who had to stay
You grew up and on. I hate and love you to this day.
You write these words because you know, I’m still here,
and will never go away.
I took my life because of the lack of you,
I didn’t even know your name.
But when they came and took the house
I found you just the same.
Sweet dreams.

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

Re: In My House

Pretty good marcalan.  Now you need some haunting chords like Em, Am and maybe A7.

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I have finally found happiness in my life.  Guitars, singing, beer and camping.  And they all intertwine wonderfully.

3 (edited by marcalan 2010-03-06 23:17:58)

Re: In My House

thanks bensonp.. I dont get remarks usually, I appreciate yours.. I do have to confess to you however when i see your call name I think beansoup ...sorry cant help it ..much thanks  youre the only one who responds
...marcalan

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

Re: In My House

hey Marcalan, this is pretty spooky stuff!  kinda cool topic...I like this.  thanks for sharing! `T

Re: In My House

Thanks T its all true

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

Re: In My House

I love the spiritual feel to this piece.

I got the image of your spirit friend playing at chasing you down and  up the basement stairs. lol scaring the pants offa you.

It would probably scare most. These happenings dont scare me at all.
Its a well written piece Marcalan. Well thought through as you'd have to revisit in your mind.
Its obviously still fresh ! all be it the years have passed.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !

Re: In My House

pleased you like this  Silver

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.

Re: In My House

Thank's for it

Re: In My House

I love good bean soup.

You can see all my video covers on [url]http://www.youtube.com/bensonp1000[/url]
I have finally found happiness in my life.  Guitars, singing, beer and camping.  And they all intertwine wonderfully.

Re: In My House

ok Pete its a deal

I thought ; If I had one idea,
and took it from beginning to end.
I would try another.