1 (edited by Tenement Funster 2015-05-13 02:18:28)

Topic: Humming Myself Awake

Getting enough sleep has become an ongoing struggle as the years accumulate. Yet there's always a tune going in the mind that keeps things flowing, so I thought of a few words to describe how grateful I am for this beautiful gift called music:

HUMMING MYSELF AWAKE

Here we go again, too early to be healthy,
Sun won't be up for a couple of hours yet,
The old proverb said this might make me wealthy,
Another old wives-tale I'd like to forget.

Cares about life tend to haunt at night,
Something quite tiny, becomes oh so immense,
And little things bother me, something's not right,
Can't put it down, it all makes no sense.

CHORUS:    A sleep-deprived stagger, yawn through the day,
        A job to get done and a dollar to make,
        But there's always a song, to lighten the way,
        Music sings within, as I hum myself awake.

My wife asks each morning, what's that tune?
She always hears the hum, always hears the whistle,
As the morning dawn brightens to blot out the moon,
A soft song flows out, while the day is yet still.

It might be a riff that I heard long ago,
Or a piece of a fragment that I can't quite recall,
As the harmony dispatches each anxious foe,
Blessed melody, rich harmony, conquers it all.

CHORUS:    A sleep-deprived stagger, yawn through the day,
        A job to get done and a dollar to make,
        But there's always a song, to lighten the way,
        Music sings within, as I hum myself awake.

Life without music, would be life without living.

Re: Humming Myself Awake

Some very deep thinking going on there TF, and some great lines. Will you be putting it into music?
I think you should.

Thick as two short planks

Re: Humming Myself Awake

Like it

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very nice TF

Looking forward to it in the songwriting section!
Jim

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Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

5 (edited by bensonp 2015-05-13 17:04:39)

Re: Humming Myself Awake

I've known a few morning whistlers in my time. Humming or singing throughout the day is how I learn the odd ball lyrics and melodies from a song I am working on. Some songs that I am unfamiliar with and have too many words in a section and I can't seem to get it. I hum away and generally get it finally. Good lyrics there for sure

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Re: Humming Myself Awake

Thanks for the kind reviews, everyone.

It is a great comfort in life to wake up every morning with a tune going in the brain ... puts fuel in the motor for the day.

As I've mentioned before, I've never been happy with any attempts at putting music to any poetry I've written ... and there's lot of it. For the above words, I picture the main verses in something like Ab minor, then raising to an A major for the chorus, to accentuate the positive contrast to my complaining.