1 (edited by ctech 2018-03-24 21:42:25)

Topic: Forbidden love

“Some times you have no control over your destiny,
Who you fall in love with, and where that path will lead you,

Or,

What through people's ignorance, it can destroy along the way”

Forbidden Love

As I slowly lose sight of my life,
Every day grows longer than the last,
I sit here with many thoughts in my head,
A mix of feelings, some of joy, some of dread,The light draining from my soul
                                                           
All that is good in me is slowly eroding away,replaced by hate,
A hate for a sick society that categorises me and my actions,
Destroying my faith in myself,
Until I no longer know who I am,

Everything I love has been lost or taken,
Only fading memories remain as the darkness takes hold
I have nothing left and that's what you wanted,
But, One day I will return,
Burst back into life.

I will smile again.

Hard times create strong men,Strong men create good times,Good times create weak men,Weak men create hard times.Cantwere rice INVICTA!

Re: Forbidden love

Another fine piece of work, CTECH ... well done indeed! Reminds me a bit of Pink Floyd's "Coming Back to Life".

Re: Forbidden love

Cheers Tenement Funster I don't usually write poems and when i do they are dark. I found this one lurking on my computer so thought I'd post it. I wrote it way back in 2006.

Hard times create strong men,Strong men create good times,Good times create weak men,Weak men create hard times.Cantwere rice INVICTA!

Re: Forbidden love

A great piece  of poetry. I have and I am sure so have many others been to those sort of emotional places in the distant past and then we get to smile again.

Re: Forbidden love

Nicely written poetry.  Agree with Peatle`s comment.

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