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Topic: my song- When it ends

When it ends, I will see you again
To start over new, as if we had just met
When it ends, I will stay the same
And after the days we were apart
I know that we can go back

There were times we were stuffy
You said no word to me, you just left
Time has likely stopped, seems like everything's gone
To let my heart realize I need you

My love for you has always been retained
It's got too great so I can't hold it back
I just need you to show me your innocence
All hardships are only a test
Because our hearts belong in one place

When it ends, we'll walk the same way
A street where we can hold our hands to its end
When it ends, we'll share everything
There's no sorrow that would split us both
And we just stay all so close

There were times we were stuffy
You said no word to me, you just left
Time has likely stopped, seems like everything's gone
To let my heart realize I need you

My love for you has always been retained
It's got too great so I can't hold it back
I just need you to show me your innocence
All hardships are only a test
Because our hearts belong in one place

Just take my hand and let us walk all our lifetimes
All heavy steps we'll overcome
And you will see that we've got so close

My love for you has always been retained
It's got too great so I can't hold it back
I just need you to show me your innocence
All hardships are only a test
Because our hearts belong in one place 

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Re: my song- When it ends

Hey Tonny - Welcome. To post your music in the Songwriting forum you need to add where the chords fit with your lyrics; otherwise, I'll have to move your post to poems.     

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Re: my song- When it ends

Hi Tonny91 .... nice to see you post a song you have written.  Well done, look forward to hearing it if you want to post it for us to listen to smile     

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Re: my song- When it ends

Hi Tony, welcome to chordie. Good song but as Jets says it's not a song until it has chords attached...it's a poem and it makes a great poem too. The mods can move it for you or you can click EDIT and add the chords. If you have time go down to CHAT and introduce yourself to our little community, as you probably know, we're a friendly bunch and you will get all kinds of help and support.     

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  • From: Gainesville, Virginia USA
  • Registered: 2006-03-04
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Re: my song- When it ends

Hey Tonny - I moved your song from the Songwriting forum to the Poems forum. Once or If you add the chords the Poems Moderator can move it back.     

J  E  T  S
...and yet a Washington Commanders fan (unless they change their name again) ...long story...HTT...C

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  • Registered: 2015-07-31
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Re: my song- When it ends

Welcome  to Chordie Tonny great lyrics hope we get to see more of you on here.     

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Re: my song- When it ends

Hello Tony, if you have read through the poem list, you will see many recently by me, Your poem runs along the same line. 

I wish luck to you in your relationship, for mine is at an end.  I hope that you will walk hand in hand once again.     

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