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Topic: HURTS WHEN YOU'RE SOBER

HURTS WHEN YOU’RE SOBER   
5/31/2019 11:59 AM

It hurts when you’re sober
It hurts when you’re drunk.
The more you try to find yourself,
I might just become a monk

My eyes turn red from watching the TV.
They water because I’m tired,
But there’s nothing else to see
Who is out there waiting now for me?

Everyone told me a light
Will be at the end of the tunnel.
I would sit and wonder,
How long do I go through the funnel?

It hurts when you’re sober,
It hurts when you’re drunk.
The more you try to find yourself,
The more you feel like a punk

Self-reflection,
Pulls the past apart.
How did I ever let it start?
I must repair my heart.

It hurts when you’re sober
It hurts when you’re drunk.
The more you try to find yourself,
You hope you don’t look like a chump.

A passing thought,
I should look to the app
That I bought.
I discover I have been sought.

It hurts when you’re sober,
It hurts when you’re drunk.
No longer feeling down.
Smiling while driving through town.

I have found the penny and picked it up
So far, it feels like good luck.
I had my rebound, kick that right down.
Drop a dime and split the nickels per kiss.

I think I found the missing ACE
The one who stands at my stage
And smiles up at me
I’ll look down, and she is all I’ll see
It hurts less to be sober
I don’t have to get drunk
She smiles
And likes KISS.

Just a rocker boy
On a rocket ride.
Looking for my song
On a new highway
And riding this new tide.

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)

Re: HURTS WHEN YOU'RE SOBER

I like this a lot, it shows optimism and you've found a new way to survive the rest of your life. This is the time I called my lost weekend when I was going through the "break up", it lasted a year and I vented my frustration with quite a few nice girls/ladies that deserved more than just me learning how to regain my self esteem, no violence mind you just misguided love. Your poem shows that too, so enjoy this time. The right one is there, I found my Ann and I'm certain you will find yours.     

Ask not what Chordie can do for you, but what you can do for Chordie.

Re: HURTS WHEN YOU'RE SOBER

Beamer great poem about rising up and riding a new tide.     

Re: HURTS WHEN YOU'RE SOBER

I like this and really nice words. It says lot and great choice of words.     

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

Re: HURTS WHEN YOU'RE SOBER

nice words very emotionnal     

Re: HURTS WHEN YOU'RE SOBER

levierweb wrote:

nice words very emotionnal


Thank you.
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“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)