1 (edited by easybeat 2023-09-11 21:35:14)

Topic: Tall Man

there once was a tall man
he was as tall as a wall
if he fell over
he had a long way to fall
although he had to be careful
when passing through doors
with a bit of luck
he would remember to duck
otherwise he would
bash his head
and the tall man
would fall

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Re: Tall Man

A problem I will never have to worry about !

Clever wording EB     

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Re: Tall Man

Thats brilliant, love it!.  You know easybeat that kids book you wrote? Well, I can see this for children either in a book of poems or part of a story book.  I can even visualize a drawing  of the tall man for this poem.  Awesome big_smile     

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Re: Tall Man

I have to duck often and have the scars to prove it! Yes very droll and would fit nicely into a book not necessarily a kids book. I suppose it's pointless to say keep em coming as they will anyway, so keep em coming     

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Re: Tall Man

EB this poem should be in your next kid's book.