• Registered: 2009-09-01
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Topic: Just a simple love story from a hopeless romantic

I'd like to hug you for a million years
Just take you in my arms
And squezze you tight
'til all the fear
and all the pain is gone.

I'd whisper how I love you
Oh, so softly in your ear
I'd tell you how I long for you
so only you could hear

I'd stay with you all through the night
We'd never measure time
And before the day had ended
I'd hug you one more time

We'd spend the hours cuddling close
Holding memory near
And before I left, I'd shed for you
A never ending tear.

  • T-Rex
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  • Registered: 2009-09-16
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Re: Just a simple love story from a hopeless romantic

A simple love story that's simply beautiful!  Sweet, to the point, lyrical; very nice.  I think you'll find you're not the only hopeless romantic here in the Poems section....Welcome! -T-Rex

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  • Registered: 2007-12-10
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Re: Just a simple love story from a hopeless romantic

hi bill, welcome to the poem forum. glad you decided to join us. i see you've been a chordie member for almost a year....testing the waters huh? i did the same!

this is a beautiful first offering, i can almost see it written on a card (in fine writing) to give to your loved one after a date (the poem mentions "as you left"). and i love the part

"I'd whisper how i love you
oh, so softly in your ear
i'd tell you how i long for you
so only you could hear."

magic

phill

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  • Registered: 2009-08-26
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Re: Just a simple love story from a hopeless romantic

Beautiful!  You know, it could go for more than just a hopeless romantic.  It could be for one that has said goodbye already forever... either through the death of love or life. 
"We'd spend the hours cuddling close
Holding memory near
And before I left, I'd shed for you
A never ending tear."

Simple, yet powerful!  Thank you Bill for sharing, and welcome to the forums!!

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  • Registered: 2007-04-03
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Re: Just a simple love story from a hopeless romantic

GORGEOUS !

I wished to marry a man like you Bill Renzo, but it wasnt to be.

I went to the wrong dance hall lol But you have renewed my belief that there are males
out there who are romantic..That will keep me going for another while lol

Well done Sir.

Old Doll.

Why Blend in with the Crowd ? When you were made to stand out !