Topic: Birthday Poem

I have two daughters. This is a poem I wrote to my youngest daughter.


Happy Birthday

Who would of thought,
to my surprise,
The day I looked in my daughter's eyes,
That I would find my sunshine,
my star,
my pearl,
All the thoughts in my head,
of this little girl.
You came to me early on the fifth of August,
That day in my life,
I will always remember.
I did not know who I was as a man,
'till the moment you were placed inside of my hands.
And it was at that split moment,
when you opened your eyes,
your true identity was no longer disguised.
I was given an angel, from heavens' above,
The test as a man,
A little girl to love.
I believe by God,
I must have been touched.
I love you daughter,
I love you so much.

Your face lights up,
whenever you smile,
A glow that can last an endless mile.
Your friends,
they love you,
your mom and I the same,
You are the completion to our circle,
the caboose of our train.

So whatever you may decide to do in your life,
A wonderful mother, a manager, and wife.
I can say this without any doubt at all,
I will always be there to catch you if you fall.
And another promise I make to you from me,
Daddy's little angel you will always be.
Who would of thought,
to my surprise,
What an incredible mother you are
And what a wonderful face.
Now you are feeling what we did with you,
And your foot is in the other shoe.
You have done is all with love and compassion,
All with your style and passion.

Happy Birthday
May the best of both of us always be with you
Your mother and I sure knew how to stew.
Celebrate today, tomorrow and always dance,
And when you need to be firm, make a stance.
May life be a joyful ride,

Happy Birthday
Our star, our pearl, our sunshine.
Our faces light up whenever you smile!

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

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you tag line says; "music is what feelings sound like..." well, your words are honest feelings musically recited. well done, thanks for sharing.

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3 (edited by Peatle Jville 2018-05-11 21:56:02)

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That is a brilliant piece of poetry to a beautiful daughter on her birthday. As you say in your poem she is a pearl..

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Thank you Phill and Peatle Jville for taking time to read it and comment. I appreciate you taking time the read it.

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

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I so wish I'd taken the time to write a poem like that to my son.

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CS
an excellent poem,very well written.

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AWWW just beautiful

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Beautifully written!

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Wow! I wish words could flow fro me like that. Nicely done.

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Wow! I wish words could flow fro me like that. Nicely done.

If I'm not mistaken it's not exactly your forte, but have you thought of putting music to it?

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Not music for that one and I have written numerous poems and at some point I may have them printed.

I have written a two CD set of original classical music and I am in the process of recording them now. It is music I have not performed publicly yet.

Music is what feelings sound like.
Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

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THAT IS AWESOME.

There's nothing like a little girl to melt a grown man's heart !

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