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Topic: A KISS IN THE SUN

This is also a new song collaboration project between Jets and myself.  but this is the raw poem I wrote last night (labor day)

A Kiss in The Sun

A kiss in the sun
The days been so fine and fun
Not supposed to get confused,
How else can I make you mine

This is just a kiss in the sun
You tell me not to think
You say you are not trying to.

But the times when I am in the car
Do you text or shout when I am not about?

As I said, Im all in
I reach for that shred of light
Untill you say, Give up the fight

We still enjoy each other
We still can have fun,
I love you , and our kisses in the sun. 

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

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Re: A KISS IN THE SUN

Another beauty, Beamer ... you're writing skills have really been shining lately ... much appreciated. 

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Re: A KISS IN THE SUN

Tenement Funster wrote:

Another beauty, Beamer ... you're writing skills have really been shining lately ... much appreciated.

Thanks! Wait till Jets and I get done!  He is forcing me to play 7th chords!!!!!!!! AHHA!  LOLOL

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

– George Lynch 2013 (Dokken, Lynchmob, KXM, Tooth & Nail etc....)