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Topic: PASSION

Hot passion,
Sweet sweat
Warm sounds about the room,
Hidden knowledge in the eyes 
As the candle reflects ,
The passionate cry.

This was not supposed to become complicated
My heart will not become placated,

Together we lay, dreaming of the future days
Neither of us seeing what was to come
The loss of trust and heartbreak,
The years gone by and all the mistakes.

Still I have to say, the desire for you
Is not contrived, it still aches
Yet i must remember that,
This too shall pass.
Yet, there is no comfort in that.

Hot passion,
Sweet sweat
Warm sounds about the room,
Hidden knowledge in the eyes 
As the candle reflects ,
Hear The passionate cry.

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

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Re: PASSION

Man there is passion in there while reading it I  feel  all the differant emotions coming through. Your ability to paint with words the desire inside ones heart at times of emotional testing  shines through again Beamer.     

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Thank you so much.   Your encouragement means a lot to me.  That was written when I first met my wife and I just updated it to include current events .     

“Find your own sound.  Dont be a second rateYngwie Malmsteen be a first rate you”

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Re: PASSION

At first we fall in lust then we find love. I think this would make a great power ballad. It seems you've always had a great talent as a poet     

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Re: PASSION

i agree with Phill ... this would make an excellent "Metalizer Ballad".     

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Beamer

I absolutely agree with all the comments above !

In my mind I envision a " Metalizer " song that softly creates a mood, and then explodes to a crescendo of passion, a guitar solo that depicts confusion, and ends with softness of heartbreak,reflection, and healing.

I think this is most excellent.

I also am hopeful as I believe I am detecting a step forward for you in the healing process.

Best wishes my friend and I would love to hear a recording of this!
JIm     

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