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Topic: What's in a kiss?

What's in a kiss?

All warm blooded animals do it.
Elephants to lions to our dogs and cats.

The expression of how we feel .
The kiss of death
The kiss of Friendship
The kiss of love
The last kiss goodbye

The conscious show of affection.
But what is conveyed within?
You never know.  Is it love,
or is it sorrow?

Will it last a second?
Or stay for 100 tomorrow's? 

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Re: What's in a kiss?

Beamer

That's good one!
Jim     

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Re: What's in a kiss?

Excellent Beamer those words could be the opening lines for a good novel.     

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Re: What's in a kiss?

Thanks guys.  I hope more see it.  still on unknown path and this is part of it.     

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Re: What's in a kiss?

peatle is right it could make the opening to a book. it's a nice piece of poetry, very deep i thought, are you going to put it to music?     

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Re: What's in a kiss?

Wow ... so much power in so few words! You've written a lot of amazing pieces, Beamer, but this is right at the top.