Topic: New version of you're a rainbow

I recorded a new version with presonus studio 4.
Mucked up second verse but still thought I'd post.
Any comments good or bad gratefully excepted.
Listen to You're a rainbow by Ctech on #SoundCloud
https://soundcloud.com/user-415450650/youre-a-rainbow 

Hard times create strong men,Strong men create good times,Good times create weak men,Weak men create hard times.Cantwere rice INVICTA!

Re: New version of you're a rainbow

Just listened to you  and it is another great piece. Glad I listened.     

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Music is life, that why our hearts have beats.

Re: New version of you're a rainbow

Ctech interesting production and sound. Good on you for taking  a new differant direction with your sound on this one.     

Re: New version of you're a rainbow

This one really rocks, CTECH ... very well done! The opening bars reminded me of ZZ Top, but you soon went your own way and made something very satisfying. Nicely performed and produced ... hat's off to ya, mate!     

Re: New version of you're a rainbow

Sounds good; I was waiting for some bass and/or drums to bring the lower end in, that would have been the icing on the cake!!!

Cheers

Richard     

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Re: New version of you're a rainbow

Thanks Classical Guitar. Glad you liked it.     

Hard times create strong men,Strong men create good times,Good times create weak men,Weak men create hard times.Cantwere rice INVICTA!

Re: New version of you're a rainbow

Thank you Peatle Jville. I'm always trying different stuff, maybe an 80 synth track will come next.     

Hard times create strong men,Strong men create good times,Good times create weak men,Weak men create hard times.Cantwere rice INVICTA!

Re: New version of you're a rainbow

Haha thanks Tenement Funster,i never realised it sounded like zztop . I was trying to put more energy into this song ,still no 100% but going in the right direction.     

Hard times create strong men,Strong men create good times,Good times create weak men,Weak men create hard times.Cantwere rice INVICTA!

Re: New version of you're a rainbow

Cheers Richard for pointing that out ,the guitar seems to drown out the bass and drums. Next time ill get it right ,its all learning. Sounds great on my pc probably because the graphic equaliser sweetened it up.     

Hard times create strong men,Strong men create good times,Good times create weak men,Weak men create hard times.Cantwere rice INVICTA!

Re: New version of you're a rainbow

Ctech

That was really awesome !
I enjoyed it-    rocking in the free world =  loving it !!!

Keep them coming !
Jim     

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