Topic: As If Morning Spoke

I was inspired to put this poem up here on chordie, I wrote a while back after reading Phill Williams brilliant poem “Ah Morning”.


As If Morning Spoke

If my poems were as obvious as a photograph.

It would give no one a space to think.

If the grass on the hill stayed a dark green all year.

Everything would be the same old.

At high tide the ocean kisses the coastline.

Then retreats to admire her beauty.

Party dogs aimlessly howling at the full moon on a dark still night annoy the quiet.

Warm morning arrives sun touches the windowpane before the curtains are drawn.

Party dogs hide under blankets while the busy bees of life rise and head out.

The loved feel warmth as the frog on a leaf hopes for a transforming kiss.

The good news of the day arrives like a solid rock sending ripples all over the pond.

With a new found faith in a higher power believers walk through a loud silence.

Leaving nothing behind not even fear.

The great spirit in the sky pushes away all the dark clouds.

While somewhere else.

Someone else.

Works through their pain.

A caring parent makes the day rise brightly.

As if there were no more pain. 

Re: As If Morning Spoke

A great comeback for my comeback to mothers son poem you wrote. Good fun this ain't it?     

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Re: As If Morning Spoke

Awesome Peatle !

You and Phill have developed into poets that are the eyes of the world.
Quite enjoyable to read both of your works - masters at it for sure.

EasyBeat - thanks for stimulating everyone -    we would have missed out on some great stuff without your challenge.

What would be great is if some others joined in .     

Your vision is not limited by what your eye can see, but what your mind can imagine.
Make your life count, and the world will be a better place because you tried.

"Use the talents you possess, for the woods would be very silent if no birds sang except only the the best." - Henry Van Dyke

Re: As If Morning Spoke

Good bit of writing there Peatle.     

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Re: As If Morning Spoke

Phill Williams wrote:

A great comeback for my comeback to mothers son poem you wrote. Good fun this ain't it?

Thank you Piri  bouncing of your poetry ideas has been real good fun.

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Jandle wrote:

Good bit of writing there Peatle.

Thank you Jan     

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TIGLJK wrote:

Awesome Peatle !

You and Phill have developed into poets that are the eyes of the world.
Quite enjoyable to read both of your works - masters at it for sure.

EasyBeat - thanks for stimulating everyone -    we would have missed out on some great stuff without your challenge.

What would be great is if some others joined in .

Thank you Jim thanks to EB he has got a lot of good things going on here.  Phill has also been a brilliant, good fun talent to swap ideas with.